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The Wind and the Trees Chat

The wind and the trees made an awful sound. One moved fast, and one stood his ground. The tree had enough of that gale and his mouth. That bluster blew by and went South.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/7/2025 8:39:00 AM

LOL! A cool metaphor!

David Crandall
Date: 6/7/2025 4:13:00 PM

Thanks Kim!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/6/2025 11:48:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your "The Wind and the Trees Chat" "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away..................

David Crandall
Date: 6/6/2025 3:46:00 PM

Thanks Paula, have fund writing away!

Karen Jones

Date: 6/5/2025 9:15:00 PM

Wow is this for contest? I like it! It’s very inspiring. I think of more the wind and trees may do!

David Crandall
Date: 6/6/2025 3:46:00 PM

Thanks Karen! I wrote it for fun, but it's under 6 lines, so I guess it might qualify one day for Line's contest. You should write a continuation of the wind and trees saga!

David Crandall
Date: 6/6/2025 3:46:00 PM

Thanks Karen! I wrote it for fun, but it's under 6 lines, so I guess it might qualify one day for Line's contest. You should write a continuation of the wind and trees saga!