The Wind and I

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The Wind And I As involved winds swept on my facial hair, A trek made constant midst nature and me, I gauged my feel of it held in my stare, That unbarred my heart and made me carefree. A trek made constant midst nature and me, Fumbles in my whiskers and my nose bare, That unbarred my heart and made me carefree, Beyond pushing the breathing winds I share, Fumbles in my whiskers and my nose bare, Inhaled inspiration furthers my spree, Beyond pushing the breathing winds I share, Facing at levels we look to agree. Inhaled inspiration furthers my spree, I gauged my feel of it held in my stare, Facing at levels we look to agree, As involved winds swept on my facial hair. 2020 June 02 *2nd Place* Pantoum Rhyme and Personification ~~Eve Roper Picture #2 *Honorable Mention* BRIAN'S Select 3,any form,any theme ~~Brian Strand

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Date: 6/14/2020 4:45:00 PM
William, The Wind and I, was enjoyable to read, perfect rhyme, flow, and syllable count. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/14/2020 4:52:00 PM
My heartfelt thanks, Eve -- Aloha~@wk
Date: 6/2/2020 4:15:00 PM
These are not so easy to write but you have done a good. I am glad that I chose this one to read today. Sara
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Date: 6/3/2020 12:04:00 AM
Forever grateful, endearing Sara -- Aloha~@wk
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