William Kelii Kekaula Poet Pantoum

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The Wind and I

The Wind And I

As involved winds swept on my facial hair,
A trek made constant midst nature and me,
I gauged my feel of it held in my stare,
That unbarred my heart and made me carefree.

A trek made constant midst nature and me,
Fumbles in my whiskers and my nose bare,
That unbarred my heart and made me carefree,
Beyond pushing the breathing winds I share,

Fumbles in my whiskers and my nose bare,
Inhaled inspiration furthers my spree,
Beyond pushing the breathing winds I share,
Facing at levels we look to agree.

Inhaled inspiration furthers my spree,
I gauged my feel of it held in my stare,
Facing at levels we look to agree,
As involved winds swept on my facial hair.

2020 June 02

*2nd Place*

Pantoum Rhyme and Personification
~~Eve Roper
Picture #2

*Honorable Mention*

BRIAN'S Select 3,any form,any theme
~~Brian Strand

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Eve Roper June 14, 2020 at 4:45 PM William, The Wind and I, was enjoyable to read, perfect rhyme, flow, and syllable count. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve William Kelii Kekaula June 14, 2020 at 4:52 PM My heartfelt thanks, Eve -- Aloha~@wk

Sara Kendrick June 2, 2020 at 4:15 PM These are not so easy to write but you have done a good. I am glad that I chose this one to read today. Sara William Kelii Kekaula June 3, 2020 at 12:04 AM Forever grateful, endearing Sara -- Aloha~@wk