Ayesha Karim Poet Free verse

The Wind

The Wind

It’s a dark night

I hear the whistling 

through the trees

“Pitter patter” the sound of the rain falling

I closed all the windows and all the doors

I can still hear the rustling of the leaves

on the ground

It is Fall my favorite season of all

A chilly windy rainy night in mid-September

The wind sounds like wolves howling or like spirits who make noise at night after dark when the spirit world is closest to this world.

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Manmath Dalei April 15, 2016 at 9:45 AM I feel happy to read ur poem. With simple English a great write. Very impressive piece.@[email protected] love Ayesha Karim April 15, 2016 at 1:58 PM Thank you Manmath. I appreciate your commenting on and liking my poems.

Malcolm Dyer April 9, 2016 at 5:06 AM Wow you painted a nice picture keep up the good work Ayesha Karim April 9, 2016 at 11:33 AM Thank you Malcolm!

Richard Lamoureux November 19, 2015 at 11:22 AM I agree with Njeri, a very discriptive write. Ayesha Karim November 19, 2015 at 11:58 AM Thanks Richard.

Njeri Hunjeri August 20, 2015 at 6:05 PM It feels like i was there. you described this so well Ayesha Karim August 21, 2015 at 7:23 AM Thank you Njeri. I'm glad you liked my poem.

P.I. Alltraine August 14, 2015 at 5:08 PM Lovely imagery. :) Ayesha Karim August 14, 2015 at 8:22 PM Thank you again, I'm glad you like my poems!

Irfanulla Shariff August 4, 2015 at 5:11 PM Incredible imagery Ayesha! Well done! Thank you for sharing it. Ayesha Karim August 4, 2015 at 9:12 PM Thanks Irfanulla. I'm glad you liked the poem.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri June 19, 2015 at 1:59 AM Great poetic imagery in delightful freeverse. Nicely portrayed. Thumbs up. Pls do review my latest poem too. Ayesha Karim June 19, 2015 at 5:30 AM Oh I will. Thank you.

Hannington Mumo June 1, 2015 at 6:47 AM Enormously expressive. 7! Ayesha Karim June 1, 2015 at 7:31 AM Thank you Hannington.

Arthur Vaso May 29, 2015 at 9:40 PM You have expressed my favorite season so well!!!! Ayesha Karim May 30, 2015 at 5:19 AM Thank you Art.

Andrea Dietrich May 18, 2015 at 3:37 PM yes, the wind is a great poetic topic. Nice one, Ayesha Ayesha Karim May 19, 2015 at 8:31 AM Thanks.

Constance La France May 18, 2015 at 11:52 AM Ayesha, a wonderful poem, so visual and well done, 7, time to write another poem, and thanks for visiting my poem, the storm Ayesha Karim May 19, 2015 at 8:31 AM Thank you.

Naghmeh Heidari April 20, 2015 at 11:39 AM Hi Ayesha, nice rainy poem. Glad to meet you, Thanks for reading my poem. Best regards Ayesha Karim April 21, 2015 at 6:38 AM Thank you Naghmeh!

Constance La France April 11, 2015 at 9:19 AM Ayesha, I like your free verse a lot, it is full of beautiful words and lines, well done 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, I, Poet Ayesha Karim April 11, 2015 at 5:25 PM Thank you Broken Wings.

Poet Destroyer A April 6, 2015 at 6:48 PM :) glad you did

Poet Destroyer A April 5, 2015 at 11:23 PM Ayesha, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA Ayesha Karim April 6, 2015 at 6:35 AM Thank you. I had a great Easter!

Emile Pinet March 25, 2015 at 7:59 AM This is very well written with impeccable imagery. Emile. #7 Ayesha Karim March 25, 2015 at 9:10 AM Thank you Emile.

Isaiah Zerbst January 15, 2015 at 9:09 AM Very real and compelling descriptions you have here. I like your little note too. Perhaps the note could be worked into the poem itself; I believe that would give it an extra dimention. Ayesha Karim January 15, 2015 at 9:13 AM Thank you Isaiah.

Pandita Sietesantos December 27, 2014 at 4:31 PM Ayesha this is such a beautiful mystical write! You have the poetic gift and we need to read more of your work so I am begging you to share more of this gift with the world. Warmest regards. Pandita. Ayesha Karim December 28, 2014 at 5:07 AM Thanks Pandita. I appreciate your kind words.

Poet Destroyer A September 10, 2014 at 7:53 PM Hi Ayesha, the two things I love about September, are, when the wind changes, and October is near... :) You did well, many lines were descriptive, I can hear the howling wind. Yes, Like a wolf... and my granddaughter, who loves to howl like a wolf... :) Awesome poem...LINDA Ayesha Karim November 11, 2014 at 9:12 PM Thank you.

Connie Marcum Wong August 20, 2014 at 7:13 PM My favorite season too. I love writing about autumn. I can see it inspires you too Ayesha. Ayesha Karim November 11, 2014 at 9:12 PM Yes Autumn does inspire me and has since my childhood. Thanks for the comment!

Jessica Thompson May 24, 2014 at 9:54 AM A really good read, it painted a lovely picture. Thanks for sharing :) Jess Ayesha Karim July 20, 2014 at 8:42 PM Thanks Jessica.

Robert Rogers February 14, 2014 at 11:25 AM Wonderful imagery!-"Nicely Penned"!...enjoyed this work very much!//Sinclair Ayesha Karim March 30, 2014 at 8:44 PM Thanks so much Robert.

Muhereza Rodgers Roger November 25, 2013 at 10:16 AM How can i describe this? Ecstatic poetry Ayesha Karim March 30, 2014 at 8:45 PM Thank you.

Jiril Clemons November 12, 2013 at 8:38 PM Nice poem, Ayesha. The wind is perfectly described. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of mine. Peace. Ayesha Karim March 30, 2014 at 8:45 PM Thanks.

Xmsd Msrsx September 29, 2013 at 5:19 PM The wind can be a truly beautiful thing and you've embellished the wind and evinced its characteristics for all that it is. Excellent work Ayesha Karim March 30, 2014 at 8:46 PM Thanks Emanuel. Thanks a lot.