The Wind

We feel the coolness of its touch when summer has begun. With oceans as its ally we’ve seen what wind has done. If wind had never filled the sails of ships from long ago, Just where this land we love would be I think no one can know. We note that mighty hurricanes begin as gentle breezes We sometimes even calculate the force behind our sneezes. Winds come in a myriad of meteorological forms Some are tiny whirlwinds while some are raging storms. So, when I feel the slightest puff or strain to keep my feet I’ll just remember winds are only currents that we meet. The winds are known by many names, these have been just a few So, I care not where they take me, as long as it’s to you. Written By John Posey 05/24/13 Author’s Note: This Poem was inspired by Gail Angel Doyle’s Poem “Where the Wind Blows” Jake
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Harrell Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 9:25 PM
Oh, so enjoyed, Jake. Love the last line :)
Posey Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 3:41 AM
Thanks, dear Heart.... I'm glad you enjoyed it... hugs... Jake
Curry Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 6:45 PM
I like this very much. good rhyme and structure. ran
Johnson Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 8:09 PM
This is a beautiful poem. We seldom stop to think about the wind's benefits when we are bemoaning its strength. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce
Babcock Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 9:01 AM
A gem of a poem about wind. Love the last line you have penned. Thanks for your comment. love phyl
Posey Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 10:08 AM
Many thanks, phyl. I'm glad you liked this... I'll be visiting you later..... Jake
Hicks Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 9:10 AM
So well crafted, my friend! And tied together with a very sweet ending that inspires awe. The wind will forever be an incredibly mysterious thing...
Posey Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 9:15 AM
Thank you, Timothy. This only proves how the right inspiration can produce better than normal results.... Jake
Cee Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 9:00 AM
Lovely poem John... thumbs up for great imagery here...:) have a nice day---ELAI
Posey Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 9:06 AM
Thank you for your kind comment... The right inspiration will enhance the realm of one's talent....Jake
Hamilton Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 5:57 AM
a fine tribute and I love your poem written full of truth in an engaging way lovely pen
Posey Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 8:57 AM
Thank you, Linda. Your comment encourages the heart of this old wordsmith..... Jake
Jones Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 9:47 PM
Aahhhh I love to sail and I love the vision of filling sails!!! Wonderful.
Posey Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 3:50 AM
Thanks, Dearest. Your comments are as fresh as a summer evening breeze... Love ya dearly..... Jake
Anglesey Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 10:52 AM
Your poems are like productions in the theater of the mind. Crafted with fine detail that take the reader on a pleasant journey. Always enjoy reading your work :)
Posey Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 11:05 AM
Thanks, I, like most writers, create for glory and relish comments like yours... Love and hugs to ya.... Jake
Andresen Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 10:25 AM
- A nice poem John - Here it is summer on the calendar .... but ice cold strong north wind - does not resemble either spring or summer ... more fall. - Pleased to read your poems - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Posey Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 2:07 PM
Thank you, dearest Anne..... Stay warm.... Jake
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