Get Your Premium Membership

The Wind

Her voice carries on the wind She sings a song to her love Almost to soft to hear Though her heart beats quickly She sings a song to her love She waits patiently for her soul mate Though her heart beats quickly Her blondehair dances in the breez She waits patiently for her soul mate Almost to soft to hear Her blonde hair dances in the breez Her voice carries on the wind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/30/2010 8:34:00 PM
Hi there new poet friend! You need an "e" on the end of your 2 breeze's....lovely effort with the form! light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 5/18/2010 4:05:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Travisti. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things