Travisti Ripley Poet Pantoum

The Wind

Her voice carries on the wind
She sings a song to her love 
Almost to soft to hear
Though her heart beats quickly 
She sings a song to her love
She waits patiently for her soul mate
Though her heart beats quickly
Her blondehair dances in the breez
She waits patiently for her soul mate
Almost to soft to hear
Her blonde hair dances in the breez
Her voice carries on the wind

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Debbie Guzzi May 30, 2010 at 8:34 PM Hi there new poet friend! You need an "e" on the end of your 2 breeze's....lovely effort with the form! light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown May 18, 2010 at 4:05 AM It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Travisti. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol