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The Wind

A strong wind blew Her new hat flew Onto the ground

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/14/2024 4:24:00 AM

Hi darling Darlene, kudos for writing such a wonderful Than-Bak. Blessings, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/15/2024 10:08:00 AM

Hello Jennifer, Hi! i hope all is well with you. thank you for this wonderful comment. Blessings my friend./Darlene/

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/8/2024 6:16:00 AM

Catches just the write touch! Love it! Another fave. Makes an impression!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/8/2024 10:33:00 AM

Hello Kim, Thank you for the lovely comment. Thank you again for the fav. Hugs. /Darlene/

Karen Croft

Date: 10/7/2024 6:25:00 PM

Loved this. Mine would be a strong wind blew and my hat flew into the ocean!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/5/2024 10:44:00 AM

The winds are strong here today so I think any hat will be blown away. Nice than-bak. love phyl

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/5/2024 10:50:00 AM

Hello Phyilis, S nice to see you here on my page. yes on a windy day a lt of hats will fly away. Love. Darlene/

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2024 5:04:00 PM

I really like your than-bak.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/5/2024 10:49:00 AM

Hello Andrea, thank you, It was my first try. I will do more of them. Hugs. / Darlene/

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/2/2024 6:53:00 AM

This is such a wonderful than-bauk, dear Darlene. It's not an easy job to portray a scene and convey a storyline with an impact within such few words.. But you've nailed this art and created a live imagery with impeccable storytelling skills ~ I can really imagine that hat flying and falling onto the ground, brilliant work!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/4/2024 10:07:00 AM

Hello Hiya, Hiya, this was my frirst try on this form. i will be doing others. Thak you this wonderful comment. Enjoy your day. Hugs. / Darlene/

Vilmos Zoltan Galyo

Date: 9/28/2024 3:11:00 PM

Sure. The hat is in the shop. New. Old style.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/28/2024 3:37:00 PM

Hello Vilmos, The hat from the shoo was new. Now an old style. Enjoy hyour weekend. my friend. /Darlene/

John Read

Date: 9/23/2024 10:12:00 AM

Must admit a Than-Bauk poem is new to me. Anyway well done Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/23/2024 11:22:00 AM

Hello John Read, Yes it is a new poetry form. It is my first try of this form. Thank you for the lovely comment. My friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene/

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/23/2024 7:25:00 AM

A splendid Than-Bauk. Quite enjoy ability.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/23/2024 11:19:00 AM

Hello Victor, Thank you Victor. It was my frist try. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Peonieslore xo

Date: 9/22/2024 1:24:00 PM

Pleasure reading

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/23/2024 2:57:00 PM

Hello Peonieslore, Thank you for this wonderful comment. enjoy byour evening my friend. /Darlene/xo

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 9/22/2024 2:32:00 AM

Hello Darlene, a lovely poem. Blessing my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/22/2024 11:10:00 AM

Hello Mulu, thjank you Mulu, blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/22/2024 1:35:00 AM

I was walking in the park today, a bit windy, and when I came back here to read this poem made me smile again!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/22/2024 11:09:00 AM

Hello Arthur. wow! That is amazing. I am glad it made you smile. My friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene/

Sally Eslinger

Date: 9/21/2024 8:25:00 AM

Hi Darlene! And your words threw me right into this picture! Nice work with this form! Hugs, sally

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/21/2024 10:08:00 AM

Hello Sally, Thank you Sally. i thought I would try it out. Hugs. /Darlene/ Have a nice day. Hugs. /Darlene/

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/19/2024 11:47:00 AM

Hi Darlene~ I was sure commented to this. Maybe i am nuts? Probably.-)). I used to wear wide brimmed hats and they were forever flying off my head. Yet..I always wore them.(with those Frecg sunglasses,)))) Hugs, Pangie. A FAV

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/19/2024 11:59:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, I never wore those hats. they never stayed on my head. Neither did the straw hats. i always chased them. Hugs. xxx /Darlene/

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/16/2024 3:21:00 PM

opps it happens what a cute active poem :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/16/2024 3:44:00 PM

Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, thank you for the cute comment. Hugs. /Darlene/

Maria Williams

Date: 9/16/2024 12:30:00 AM

Hi Darlene, they say less is more and your poem says it all in such a few words. Hugs Maria

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/16/2024 10:37:00 AM

Hello Maria Williams, thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/

Ink Empress

Date: 9/15/2024 1:33:00 PM

Dear Darlene, it’s amazing and impressive how one can paint a scene and deliver it in few syllables! I saw the hat fly! And this did happen to me but it blew and fell onto the sea! Made me think of that as i read this! Pleasure reading your work, sending you light always

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/15/2024 2:49:00 PM

Hello Ink Empress, Thank you for the lovely comment. The wind could be very strong to blow a hat off someone's head. Thank you for sending me the light. Hugs to you. /Darlene/

Alkas Poetry

Date: 9/14/2024 7:24:00 AM

Only a poet could capture such a prosaic scene.... salute dearest Darlene, yr friend alkas

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/14/2024 11:09:00 AM

Hello Alakas, I watch what nature does then write about it. Thank you for the wonderful comment. my dearest friend. Enjoy your weekend. ./Darlene/

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/14/2024 5:33:00 AM

Great one Darlene. I can see it clearly happening. Have a nice day :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/14/2024 11:11:00 AM

Hello Heidi, I saw it happening when i was creating this poem. thank you. enjoy your weekend. Hugs. /Darlene/

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/13/2024 4:44:00 AM

Dear Darlene, What a great Than-Bauk that is full of life in so few action words. Have a great weekend! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/13/2024 9:47:00 AM

Hello Daniel Rodgers, Thank you for the lovely comment. Daniel. I had a great weekend. I hope you did to. Blessings my frriend. /Darlene/

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/12/2024 6:49:00 PM

A lovely poem, Darlene. The wind is very capricious. Best of wishes, Evelyn

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/13/2024 9:49:00 AM

Hello Evelyn, yes the wind is very capricious. Best wishes. /Darlene/

Karen Croft

Date: 9/12/2024 1:42:00 PM

Very nice. I will have to sit down and try this poetry form!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/13/2024 9:51:00 AM

Hello Karen, You ca doit. it was my first try. Hugs. /Darlene/

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/12/2024 5:41:00 AM

Nature does have a way of taking control. My wife almost always wears a hat, many she has designed and made herself. Very descriptive write. Enjoyed!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/12/2024 10:34:00 AM

Hello Joe DiMino, Thank you Joe for this lovely comment. Enjoy you8r day my friend. /Darlene/

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/11/2024 12:27:00 PM

Dear Darlene, I adore your depiction of the wind. Such vibrant imagery full of action! Splendid poetry my sweet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/12/2024 10:37:00 AM

Hello Susan, So nice to see you on my on m y page. That wind sometimes causes problems with our hats.. thank you for this wondser4ful comment. Warmth wishes. /Darlene/

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/11/2024 12:01:00 AM

:) Lovely poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/11/2024 10:15:00 AM

Hello AArthur, Hi! Thank you for this lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/