The Wind

the wind swept across my face

        and touched me with


          a touch as light 


                   as a feather

   kissing me like a tropical breeze

       taunting and teasing me

        until we feel again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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June 10, 2008 at 8:40 PM
oooooh~ Yummy~! Great imagery~Taking the reader so quickly with such few words leaves me w/ a greater enticement!~LOVED it! You have a beautiful talent and your words fly off the page with glimmering glee~(he he he);) Very extraordinary poetry darling~ Thanks for mentioning it so I could read it...I enjoy your company and comments (constructive as well) I always think I can do better after I reread some of my work...I ask U...please critique my work for better words etc~! Your soupie buddy~me :)
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