The Wily Thorn

The wily thorn that signifies the rose
abides; some hapless fool will come along
untutored in the art of willful pose
to grasp, and sustain a sharp reminder!

His gift bestowed and modestly attended,
there stirs a trembling only she may know
whose pledge is true and joyfully intended,
first semblance of a passion soon to grow.

How powerful beauty's lure can be!
it supersedes, and pricks the heart to bleed,
and captured in its snare they're led
on rapture's path, where'er that path may lead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 1/24/2009 12:09:00 PM
Beautiful! "Rapture's path"....lovely. It is a sometimes long, twisted road, but always exciting! I continue to be astounded when I read your work. Congrats on being featured with this fantastic write. Donna G.
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Date: 1/24/2009 4:37:00 AM
a very imaginative piece... good job! ~ Arany
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Date: 1/22/2009 1:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured, Great piece...God Bless*Tyesha
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Date: 1/22/2009 9:52:00 AM
Every Rose has a rhorn. Legend has it that it protects the beauty. Congrats Keith, on "The Wily Thorn" being featured. Vince
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Date: 1/22/2009 9:05:00 AM
Keith - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/20/2009 10:16:00 PM
Hi Keith, So nice to see you featured this week. SUPERB! as always. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/19/2009 5:23:00 PM
Insightful poem, Keith! I loved the line "how powerful beauty's lure can be"...our society falls into the trap of beauty on the outside...rather than looking on the inside. Well written, lovely poem, and well deserved to be featured this week. ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/19/2009 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful write being featured this week, Keith. Love and hugs, Robin
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Date: 1/19/2009 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Keith. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2009 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations Keith on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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