The Wily Thorn

The wily thorn that signifies the rose
abides; some hapless fool will come along
untutored in the art of willful pose
to grasp, and sustain a sharp reminder!

His gift bestowed and modestly attended,
there stirs a trembling only she may know
whose pledge is true and joyfully intended,
first semblance of a passion soon to grow.

How powerful beauty's lure can be!
it supersedes, and pricks the heart to bleed,
and captured in its snare they're led
on rapture's path, where'er that path may lead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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January 24, 2009 at 12:09 PM
Beautiful! "Rapture's path"....lovely. It is a sometimes long, twisted road, but always exciting! I continue to be astounded when I read your work. Congrats on being featured with this fantastic write. Donna G.
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January 24, 2009 at 4:37 AM
a very imaginative piece... good job! ~ Arany
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January 22, 2009 at 1:43 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured, Great piece...God Bless*Tyesha
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January 22, 2009 at 9:52 AM
Every Rose has a rhorn. Legend has it that it protects the beauty. Congrats Keith, on "The Wily Thorn" being featured. Vince
Jordan Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 9:05 AM
Keith - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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January 20, 2009 at 10:16 PM
Hi Keith, So nice to see you featured this week. SUPERB! as always. Love, Lainie
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January 19, 2009 at 5:23 PM
Insightful poem, Keith! I loved the line "how powerful beauty's lure can be"...our society falls into the trap of beauty on the outside...rather than looking on the inside. Well written, lovely poem, and well deserved to be featured this week. ~ Carrie
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January 19, 2009 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful write being featured this week, Keith. Love and hugs, Robin
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January 19, 2009 at 10:31 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Keith. Love, Carol
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January 19, 2009 at 9:57 AM
Congratulations Keith on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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