The Willow Weeps

I feel left bare
naked of charm
the mystery of me
when in fullest delight
as left a shiver
so quick as the fall of the night.

My fruits that fed,
shelter to the storm,
the hidden lovers, undiscovered,
and their laughter upon my throne.

What of me now?
as winter as called,
no lovers delight,
to rest at my feet,
for I am the willow,
taste my tears
as I weep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Wessels Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 5:49 PM
Beautiful and serene imagery here. A well honed poem! Very enchanting and an elegant flow. Thank you ann for directing me to your lovely poem. Warmly, chrissy
Richards Avatar
November 7, 2008 at 7:01 AM
Beautifully done, Ann!! I love the personification of this, and the chilly nature you led the reader. A bit of mystery. Nicely done! :) Fondly, Carrie
Degenhardt Avatar
November 7, 2008 at 6:47 AM
This is so visual and sad for the tree as it watched over love in the warm seasons and stands bare now in the cold. Very well written as it flows smoothly and has the perfect tone. Michael
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