The Willow Tree

A weeping willow is alone outside                                                                                Was it happy I couldn’t decide                                                                                          Its trunk was thick and massively tall                                                                                            But its weeping leaves almost made it look small

It sat in the woods behind my house
Its only company was a small mouse
It seemed to whisper secret truths
About what it had seen through its youth

It’s been around longer than four generations  
Being one of the oldest creations 
My elders say mind what you do
Because if you don’t it’ll tell on you

It keeps a big watchful eye 
On those who mess around and spy
I like to call it my hidden knight
That is as pure as any shinning light

If you sit beneath it you’ll hear its song
Making you feel as if you belong
You can watch its leaves sway
Dancing in its own special way 

The day I hear this willow weep
I will feel my pain go down deep                                                                                                           For this willow is a big friend of mine                                                                                                Who I hope will always be fine 

So now I sit up in my room                                                                                                                 waiting for it to go dark soon                                                                                                                I’m waiting for the sun to break free                                                                                                       So I can say hello to the willow tree



written by my twin sister (Phoenix Szentesi)  and I

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/27/2017 4:58:00 PM
I enjoyed this. You and your sister did very well with this :)
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Magan Szentesi
Date: 6/27/2017 5:01:00 PM
thxs :)
Date: 6/27/2017 4:45:00 PM
Magan, you and your sister did a beautiful job with this. It is enchanting and mystical and so very nicely done.
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Magan Szentesi
Date: 6/27/2017 4:49:00 PM
thanks, we're happy that to enjoyed it :D
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