Tim B Poet Tetractys

The Wild Side

By Tim Bryant



Wild
Brain flows
Side to side
Stirs an image
Sparks passion and illuminates my pen

Writing deep mysteries that are within
My mind so wild
Sided, it
Clears out
Pain


For Michael J Falotico's contest: "Where Your Poetry Comes From"

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Elizabeth Wesley October 9, 2011 at 9:35 PM An illuminated pen is what you have Tim. Love the deep mysteries that probe the poet's mind>

Carol Sunshine Brown August 1, 2011 at 1:44 PM Congratulations on your poem placing in Michael J. Falotico's " Where Your Poetry Comes From" contest Tim. Love, Carol

Caryl Ramsdale July 31, 2011 at 2:58 PM A "Where Your Poetry Comes From" Winner Congratulations! Caryl

Wilma Neels July 31, 2011 at 8:13 AM I love that "clears out pain" part Tim.. Beautiful gem you have here.. Congratulations on your awesome win in Michael's contest ;)

Lee Ramage July 30, 2011 at 7:27 PM Congratulations Tim on your win. well done. Lee

Joseph Osita July 30, 2011 at 5:48 PM A well crafted tetractys! Many congrats on your big win in Michael's contest

Andrea Dietrich July 30, 2011 at 2:59 PM Congratulations, Tim. Good poem!

Nette Onclaud July 30, 2011 at 1:23 PM YES!..a round of sparkling cheers for your great win, tim ! :)huggs!

Kash Poet July 30, 2011 at 10:02 AM Congrats Tim....beautiful poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 30, 2011 at 9:41 AM Congrats Tim on a great third place win with this dynamic delight in poetry luv..

Jun-Jun Villanueva July 30, 2011 at 9:28 AM really amazing Tim....CONGRATULATIONS!!!~~~~smile~~~~*-*junjun

Michael J. Falotico July 30, 2011 at 8:39 AM Congrats Tim !!!! and thanks so much for entering my contest....Michael

James Fraser July 27, 2011 at 6:05 PM Fine entry Tim for Michael's contest. Deep mysteries from within can reveal gems. Good luck with this fine piece :)

Dr.Ram Mehta July 25, 2011 at 8:59 PM Wonderful take on the theme, Tim Tim B July 25, 2011 at 11:30 PM Thank you sir, really enjoyed yours as well.

Carolyn Devonshire July 25, 2011 at 3:25 PM Awesome entry, Tim. Especially like the way the wild brain sparks passion and illuminates my pen. This is surely a winner. Easy topic to write on so I think this contest will fill quickly. Vest wishes for success! Love, Carolyn Tim B July 25, 2011 at 3:53 PM Thanks Carolyn! I hope your own wild brain keeps on sparking because your poems are astounding, best wishes to you as well :)

Nette Onclaud July 25, 2011 at 3:07 PM oh my, tim... i like the way you appraoched this with such experiential expo of the senses.. winner for me... :) huggs, nette Tim B July 25, 2011 at 3:54 PM You are always too kind nette, your comments are much appreciated :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 24, 2011 at 8:33 PM Awesome words Tim for the contest theme.. great flow and clearly stated luv..good luck to u in the contest... Tim B July 25, 2011 at 3:55 PM Thank you Linda, I did try to bring it with some lucidity :)

Melissa Parker - Red Fox July 24, 2011 at 8:04 PM I love this! The writing is fresh and beautiful. Tim B July 25, 2011 at 3:55 PM Thanks Melissa!

Kyle Carlson July 24, 2011 at 7:52 PM Awesome things are happening - Kyle Tim B July 24, 2011 at 8:02 PM Thank you Kyle, much appreciated.