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The Wild Flowers

In the country she and I spied Wild flowers growing in a field Urgently casting thoughts aside We ran with passion unconcealed The pure beauty of these flowers Captured our hearts which quickly beat To restrain was within our powers But abandoned in summer's heat Blooms softly dancing in the breeze We viewed as a gift from above Radiance that could be but a tease Compared to our young hearts love!

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Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 12/28/2017 8:32:00 AM

I agree with all the comments; this is lovely and wonderful Pat! Very romantic!~Che :)

Pat Adams
Date: 12/28/2017 11:38:00 AM

Thank you Cheryl. It was fun to write! Sometimes the ones that just come to you are better!.....patrick

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/26/2017 11:27:00 PM

So this is what happens when you turn your pen to romance... absolutely wonderful my friend! xomo :)

Pat Adams
Date: 12/27/2017 9:44:00 PM

I guess there's all kinds of weird stuff in this head of mine! DON'T go in there!!!!!!!!........just kidding...thanks!!!!..xxxox....(Snuck one in there)....pat

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/26/2017 7:48:00 PM

this is very lovely, pat!

Pat Adams
Date: 12/27/2017 9:42:00 PM

Thank you so much, Ilene. That is a wonderful thing to say, er write, ah think..........anyway....THANKS!!!!...........Patrick

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/26/2017 6:10:00 PM

Oh Pat i find this poem to be romantic. have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/29/2017 5:58:00 PM

I like your style my friend. Happy New Year

Pat Adams
Date: 12/27/2017 9:39:00 PM

Thank you Darlene. Sometimes I get kind of mushy........pat