The Wild Flowers

In the country she and I spied
Wild flowers growing in a field
Urgently casting thoughts aside
We ran with passion unconcealed

The pure beauty of these flowers
Captured our hearts which quickly beat
To restrain was within our powers
But abandoned in summer's heat

Blooms softly dancing in the breeze
We viewed as a gift from above 
Radiance that could be but a tease
Compared to our young hearts love!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hoffman Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 8:32 AM
I agree with all the comments; this is lovely and wonderful Pat! Very romantic!~Che :)
Adams Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 11:38 AM
Thank you Cheryl. It was fun to write! Sometimes the ones that just come to you are better!.....patrick
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 11:27 PM
So this is what happens when you turn your pen to romance... absolutely wonderful my friend! xomo :)
Adams Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 9:44 PM
I guess there's all kinds of weird stuff in this head of mine! DON'T go in there!!!!!!!!........just kidding...thanks!!!!..xxxox....(Snuck one in there)....pat
Bauer Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:48 PM
this is very lovely, pat!
Adams Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 9:42 PM
Thank you so much, Ilene. That is a wonderful thing to say, er write, ah think..........anyway....THANKS!!!!...........Patrick
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 6:10 PM
Oh Pat i find this poem to be romantic. have a nice evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 5:58 PM
I like your style my friend. Happy New Year
Adams Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 9:39 PM
Thank you Darlene. Sometimes I get kind of mushy........pat
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