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The Wild Fades Blue

Fading deepest blue
cherry blossom storm falling
cleansing deepest wounds

Wind blows crystal rain
rain cascades carless droplets
garden bloom sweet jade

Stillness sharpens blade
mountains fade magenta skies
seas swell angry waves

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/30/2018 1:25:00 PM
Nicely done, Scott. Especially like second stanza. // Barry
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Date: 8/30/2018 4:22:00 AM
Strong imagery, Scott, with a bit of anger at the end. Well done.
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Scott Tunstall
Date: 8/30/2018 8:06:00 AM
thank you for your kind words

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