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The wild fades blue

Fading deepest blue cherry blossom storm falling cleansing deepest wounds Wind blows crystal rain rain cascades carless droplets garden bloom sweet jade Stillness sharpens blade mountains fade magenta skies seas swell angry waves

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Date: 8/30/2018 1:25:00 PM
Nicely done, Scott. Especially like second stanza. // Barry
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Date: 8/30/2018 4:22:00 AM
Strong imagery, Scott, with a bit of anger at the end. Well done.
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SCOTT TUNSTALL
Date: 8/30/2018 8:06:00 AM
thank you for your kind words