The Wild Fades Blue

Fading deepest blue
cherry blossom storm falling
cleansing deepest wounds

Wind blows crystal rain
rain cascades carless droplets
garden bloom sweet jade

Stillness sharpens blade
mountains fade magenta skies
seas swell angry waves
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Stebbings Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Nicely done, Scott. Especially like second stanza. // Barry
Capitano Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 4:22 AM
Strong imagery, Scott, with a bit of anger at the end. Well done.
Tunstall Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 8:06 AM
thank you for your kind words
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