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The Wickedness of Time

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Do not ask time to work in tandem with you. It won't. It revels in doing just the opposite. It is Satan's vicious curse. Time doesn't care if you have one leg hopping along the fast lane to keep up. It won't adjust to your pace. It leaves you in the dust every time. Do not bother extending a hand of friendship to time. It slaps down every outstretched hand. It insists on staying your enemy. Time seethes with envy; so envious it's working year after year to ravage your beautiful face with age, to oxidize all your precious shiny things. It scoffs at your youth and vitality so enjoy them while you have them. Live your life while both are still intact. before time wreaks its havoc. Marvel at the colorful flowers blooming in your garden while spring is still young, for time will eventually wilt them all. Cruel and merciless; time... kills us all in the end! N-A re-run 7 Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place) Sponsored by John Hamilton Date submitted: 06/14/2020 Time Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke (N/A) Date written: 06/10/2020

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Date: 6/17/2020 1:54:00 AM
Ah! True, powerful words Edward. Your muse echoes in my mind like a powerful message. This is outstanding my friend. Congratulations on your win :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/17/2020 6:47:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Aditi:-) Your incessant support means a great deal to me!
Date: 6/15/2020 3:16:00 PM
Top-notch poem, Edward. I enjoyed. A crime this was ever an "N/A."
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/15/2020 4:27:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eric:-) Glad you enjoyed my poem!
Date: 6/15/2020 9:40:00 AM
Fitting that this should finally get recognized Edward, you were smart to enter this one, congrats on a great write and win!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/15/2020 12:34:00 PM
Thank you so much for the placement, John:-) I'm honored!
Date: 6/11/2020 10:13:00 AM
Wow Edward you have painted time as a cruel dictator so fitting in the end it kills us all. Well said dear poet!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/11/2020 11:34:00 AM
Yeah, father time is rough on all of us, lol. Thanks for dropping by, John:-)

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