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The Wickedness of Time

Do not ask time
to work in tandem with you. It won't. 
It revels in doing just the opposite.
It is Satan's vicious curse.

Time doesn't care if you have one leg
hopping along the fast lane
to keep up. It won't adjust to your pace.
It leaves you in the dust every time.

Do not bother extending
a hand of friendship to time.
It slaps down every outstretched hand.
It insists on staying your enemy.

Time seethes with envy;  so envious 
it's working year after year
to ravage your beautiful face with age,
to oxidize all your precious shiny things.

It scoffs at your youth and vitality
so enjoy them while you have them.
Live your life while both are still intact.
before time wreaks its havoc.

Marvel at the colorful flowers 
blooming in your garden while spring 
is still young, for time will eventually 
wilt them all. Cruel and merciless; time...

kills us all in the end!


N-A re-run 7 Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place)	
Sponsored by John Hamilton
Date submitted: 06/14/2020

Time Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke (N/A)
Date written: 06/10/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 1:54 AM
Ah! True, powerful words Edward. Your muse echoes in my mind like a powerful message. This is outstanding my friend. Congratulations on your win :)
Ibeh Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 6:47 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Aditi:-) Your incessant support means a great deal to me!
Cohen Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 3:16 PM
Top-notch poem, Edward. I enjoyed. A crime this was ever an "N/A."
Ibeh Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 4:27 PM
Thank you very much, Eric:-) Glad you enjoyed my poem!
Hamilton Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 9:40 AM
Fitting that this should finally get recognized Edward, you were smart to enter this one, congrats on a great write and win!
Ibeh Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 12:34 PM
Thank you so much for the placement, John:-) I'm honored!
Hamilton Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 10:13 AM
Wow Edward you have painted time as a cruel dictator so fitting in the end it kills us all. Well said dear poet!
Ibeh Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 11:34 AM
Yeah, father time is rough on all of us, lol. Thanks for dropping by, John:-)
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