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The Whole Sky Was White

The whole sky was white No blueness was shown There was no sunshine A chill in the air It was very cold Then the snowflakes fell Lightly coating the ground Only to repeat Coating the ground white mother nature tease She can not decide Whether it is spring for thew month of March Or is it winter

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Maximilian G. Wolf

Date: 4/22/2024 7:21:00 AM

Very nice. Great read. /Max/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/22/2024 10:18:00 AM

Hello Max, Thank you for the love.ly comment. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2024 7:09:00 PM

Great title and interesting poem. Tfs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/15/2024 10:27:00 AM

Hello Andrea, Thank you for the ;lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 3/31/2024 7:01:00 AM

Beautifully written, my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/1/2024 9:51:00 AM

Hello Zyrool, Hi! Thank you for this wonderful comment. Your friend /darlene Enjoy your day.

Christina Bowring

Date: 3/24/2024 12:58:00 AM

This is such a lovely poem to read dear Darlene. Love the imagery as the snow fell and you can sense the coldness. You have painted the scene well as everything turns to the freshness and purity of snow. Love the last stanza with the tease of Mother Nature and the uncertainty of which season it is and should be. Really enjoyed reading it. Blessings to you x

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/24/2024 4:07:00 AM

Good Morning Christina, Thank you for this lovely comment. Mother nature is a tease. it snows , then melts. then snows again. it seems winter is the longest season ever. It is suppose to e spring. yet winter wants to hang around. I am tired of winter. Thank you again. blessings my frkiend. /darlenex Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/20/2024 9:57:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. It sounds like winter is playing with you. Hello Spring!!! Have a wonderful/fun day in the sun........................

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/20/2024 11:41:00 AM

Hello Paula, Winter is a tease. Winter wants to stay longer. it should go home and let Spring come . Enjoy writing away. Hugs. /Darlene/

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/16/2024 12:37:00 PM

The weather is changing a lot here. Many gray days. Some mild sunny ones. Then we had a foot of heavy snow recently. Lately, some rain. I can relate to your poem Darlene. Good one :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/18/2024 2:53:00 PM

Hello Heidi, today we had snow flurries. The rooves are covered with snow. the ground is not covered. I rearranged my closet today.I do this twice a year. Hugs. /Darlene/

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/14/2024 8:55:00 AM

Climate change is occurring worldwide, We are in our first month of Autumn and we are experiencing our really very hot summer days now, with temperatures going up to 39 degrees. Lovely write Darlene, Hugs and blessings my friend, JENNIFER.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/14/2024 11:22:00 AM

Hello Jennifer, Summer weather in Autumn! Wow! Going up to 39 wow! That is hot! Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs my friend. Blessings. /Darlene/

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/14/2024 3:32:00 AM

Nature has a habit of changing. Soon it will be full spring.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/14/2024 11:23:00 AM

Hello victor, Yes nature has a way to change. I agree it will be full spring soon . My friend Enjoy your day. /Darlene/

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/13/2024 3:14:00 PM

March winds...yipe! I hear you.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/13/2024 3:40:00 PM

Hello Joe, the March wind is not so bad now. All the snow has melted. the grass is greener. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 3/13/2024 5:47:00 AM

Hello Drlene,a lovely poem,with changeable images of nature.Darlene Blessings.

Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 3/14/2024 2:34:00 AM

Hello Darlene ,you are welcome.Darlene Blessings.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/13/2024 10:46:00 AM

hello Mulu, Thank you Mulu. A beautiful day here with sun shine. blessings my friend. /Darlene./

Peter Dome

Date: 3/12/2024 5:24:00 PM

Flows from the quill like a river. We get mad weather days here across the pond. What a great imagination and talent Pete.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/13/2024 10:45:00 AM

Hello Pete, So you have had many winter storms? Was your Christmas green? Mine was , we had no snow. Thank you for the wonderful comment my friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene/

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/12/2024 1:31:00 PM

I agree. Weather has been back and forth. I like your forecasting.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/12/2024 2:42:00 PM

Hello Hilda, yes the weather has been back and forth. Thank you. Hugs. /darlene/

Deb M

Date: 3/12/2024 6:18:00 AM

Just beautiful sweet Darlene…..your poem has a lovely tranquil calm feeling! Debx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/12/2024 10:50:00 AM

Hello Kim, thank you Deb. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/x

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/12/2024 5:12:00 AM

Weather is changing so fast lately mixing up the seasons. Moodiness of weather well described, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/12/2024 5:26:00 AM

Hello Vijay, Good morning. Mother nature is moody. I hope you have a good day my friend. /Darlene/

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/11/2024 10:20:00 PM

I love your poem's vivid imagery, Darlene. It's filled with colors and motion and sensation. Mother Nature's teasing can be fun, especially since we know spring will eventually win. Blessings.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/12/2024 5:28:00 AM

Hello Evelyn, yes Evelyn, Spring does win all the time. Even though it is a battle between winter & spring. Hugs. /Darlene/

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/11/2024 5:46:00 PM

lovely and descriptive of this transitional time between winter and spring...each one is fighting it out deciding who will eventually win. We all anticipate the 'thaw' and spring teases us into thinking she's made it so...but ol' man winter strikes a harsh blow. Loved this...have a great evening, Sara

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/11/2024 2:31:00 PM

Hello Kim, Thank you Kim. I hope you had a good day spent. Hugs. /Darlene/ Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/11/2024 12:35:00 PM

I love your title! The first verse my favorite with its contrast and mood! Hugs ~ Kim

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/12/2024 5:31:00 AM

Hello Kim, thank you.Thank you flor the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/