The White Roses Died With You

She runs, but at every turn, there he is again
Invading her maze of shadows, private dreams
He corners her and mocks, “I knew you when…”
Beside his casket are her white wedding roses
Their scent chokes her as the coffin lid closes
He always laughs as the casket's lowered, pushing her to extremes

Young widow’s dreaded recital; she’s tried to shake it off  
Blood has no time to dry in this repeating nightmare
Spinning in her mind’s carousel, his face grins as if to scoff
At last he fades; she casts white roses on his grave
Her hollow heart writhes in grief's tidal wave
She lives to dream again, knowing he’ll be there




*Written December 2530, 2018
For Lu Loo’s Rhyme Time 7 – Deep and Dark Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 7/2/2019 4:45:00 PM
Hello Carolyn Devonshire, I feel so sad for the widow losing her husband. to throw white roses into the coffin is a nice touch. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/15/2019 4:32:00 PM
I had no doubt this entry would be high on the winners' list, Carolyn. So pleased to be back with deserved congratulations! Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/14/2019 4:37:00 PM
A really well-written, vivid and dark nightmare, Carolyn! Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/11/2019 4:56:00 PM
Wow Carolyn this is profoundly dark for you! A chilling nightmare. A nightmare which unfortunately some share of having the same dream over and over that is embedded in their psyche. Very well written my friend. : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/1/2019 8:40:00 AM
Deep and Dark Poetry is what the sponsor asked for, Carolyn, and, haunted by dreams, you have served the perfect entry! Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/1/2019 8:21:00 AM
You wrote for this contest so well, so many things seems to die when someone passes away... You expressed the emotions very well..
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Date: 12/31/2018 2:36:00 PM
Tragic and heart-breaking and gracefully penned, wishing you all the best in the contest!
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Date: 12/30/2018 3:23:00 PM
You aptly painted haunting images for this contest..nightmare or not it feels real and dark. Well written, Carolyn.
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Date: 12/30/2018 3:13:00 PM
wow it is very dark and deep and sad, Carolyn. All the ingredients she asked for!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/31/2018 2:45:00 PM
Repeating dreams can sometimes be awful, Andrea. Thanks for reading.
Date: 12/30/2018 2:43:00 PM
Well written Carolyn, a sad and dark verse. Good luck. Best wishes for 2019. Tom.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/31/2018 2:46:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Tom. Haven't been online much lately, but let me wish you and all here a happy New Year!
Date: 12/30/2018 2:26:00 PM
Aww Carolyn so dark deep and sad. I know Luloo will love the imagery here, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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