The White Gazebo



It was a vibrant,sunlit spring,
When he surprised her with a ring!
In the most beautiful place of all,
In the white gazebo, next to the
heavily ivied, wall.
All her life she had dreamed of a
moment like this.
With her handsome prince on his
knee,implanting a sweet kiss.
Considerate he,kept staring into her 
tear-filled eyes!
They both knew their future ahead, 
would be a fulfilling surprise.
A home, the welcomed sound of children's feet.
A warm fireplace, was in their future to greet.


     September 13, 2020
             8:00pm PST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 9/16/2020 5:59:00 AM
More romantic dreamings and no better place to tie the knot than under a white gazebo. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/16/2020 7:28:00 AM
Always, a romantic. That's me. And very passionate about truth, freedom and never being taken for granted. Not me, you, or anyone! A gazebo is a perfect place. PS. Thanks for your mail. Correcting my typo now. Apologies, Panagiota xx
Date: 9/14/2020 7:45:00 PM
A charming place for a proposal. Gazebos are soooo underrated really. They contain so many possibilities --- one of which is that a Frisco girl would write an enchanting poem about one. Kudos, my friend. ~ Gershon
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/15/2020 10:03:00 AM
Gershon, I like being called a Frisco girl..))) Next time I get engaged, will be sure it's in a gazebo. Will invite you to celebrate. Thank you, Panagiota xx
Date: 9/14/2020 6:19:00 PM
Hello Panagiota … a positive belief in an everlasting romance. Beautiful Panagiota - Lindsay
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/15/2020 10:00:00 AM
Hi Lindsay, hope all going well in Australia! Indeed, I am a believer in love that has no end.)) Thank you... Panagiota xx
Date: 9/14/2020 12:02:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, I felt happy ror the person in your poem. Beautifully done. Hugs darlene xxxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/15/2020 11:47:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, I never had a gazebos. Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/14/2020 12:05:00 PM
Darlene...I do agree so much with your response! Me, too! Gazebos are just beautiful. Hugs, Panagiota xxxooo
Date: 9/14/2020 10:15:00 AM
Another beautiful write from your very talented quill, Pangie! Love it! Bob
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/14/2020 10:18:00 AM
Good Morning, Bob~ So glad you liked it. Thanks Pangie xx
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