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The Whisper of Wind

Come to me and lay down your wearies,
              In the bed of rose petals rest appease.

          The soft  voice of siren will send you in to bliss.
      'Til you close your eyes and start dreaming in peace.

           Dance with me, I'll take you in heavenly place.
       Where angels and fairies singing a song of praise.

                   Fly high and touch the ceiling of sky.
             Feel the pleasure within of nature's lullaby.





written: 5/21/2014
Contest name: it's all about nature #3
Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/19/2014 8:33:00 PM

I shall whisper to you that this is a beautiful poem!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2014 5:14:00 PM

what a sweet lullaby, SO good to see this one from you, and thanks for supporting my blog.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/2/2014 4:36:00 AM

wow! ang galing ng lines!!! love the combination of nature and serenity, the outcome is a beauty.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/27/2014 6:41:00 AM

Congratulations on the win with this wonderful write on nature, Aiyah

Tim Smith

Date: 5/25/2014 3:13:00 PM

Stopping back with congratulations on this beauty...hugs Tim

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/26/2014 9:28:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Sir Tim!!! :O))

Paul Callus

Date: 5/25/2014 1:56:00 PM

I think you have persuaded me to come along, too:) Lovely write, AiyaH! Congrats on a fine win. // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/25/2014 12:42:00 PM

Aiyah, Congratulations, I hope you enjoy your win and placement. Stop by my blog, "Petals in the Wind" if you like. Have a sweet Sunday.... XOX~ Linda

Len Gasun

Date: 5/25/2014 3:19:00 AM

A very beautiful poem so sweet and lovely in my ears my dear friend AiyaH. You write so well. Thank u so much for sharing. I love it so much. I'm sure this will win. Good luck my dear friend. Biggest hugs! love lots, Leonora

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/25/2014 3:40:00 AM

thanks a lot my dear friend Leo...Your comment really made my day... You lift me high... especially now that I'm in my dying moment.. wish to have you sometimes.. to chat w/ u and speak what's on my heart... I'm happy for a friendship I've found in you... many hugs and kisses for you.... stay sweet and pretty hearted one.. ^_^

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/22/2014 8:43:00 PM

Victory in a voice of entwining love, then the Siren gets her prize. I'm excited over the rich imagery in this poem, and the warming voice allaying a man's strain and need for glory. J.A.B.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/23/2014 6:23:00 PM

Thanks for this winning comment, J.A.B.!!! :O))

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2014 7:03:00 PM

such a beautiful whisper my awesome friend, Aiyah, i'm only taking a quick peek... Love this already...Linda

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/23/2014 6:22:00 PM

Thank you, PD!!! ... I appreciate your time commenting on my little piece... ^_^ and for giving me a chance to be part of your contest.. :O))) big hug!!!

Arlene Smith

Date: 5/21/2014 4:24:00 PM

Aiyah, once again I am humbled that ones of you who can so beautifully craft a piece take time to give my writings a read...

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/23/2014 6:19:00 PM

Thank you for this wonderful message... I deeply appreciate it... :O))

Nathan D.

Date: 5/21/2014 12:06:00 PM

good luck in contest you should place high or win with this great poem

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/21/2014 12:12:00 PM

Hi Nathan.. thanks a lot for your support!!! ..I remember, you held a contest before where I joined too...Thanks again!!! ..:O)) Wish you're doing well... ^_^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2014 11:39:00 AM

- A soothing and beautiful lullaby from nature smells - I wish you good luck in contest dear friend AiyaH - two thumbs up for your poem: The Whisper of Wind - <3 U !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/21/2014 12:14:00 PM

Hi my dearest friend, Anne!! .. it's a pleasure to see your beautiful eye on your avatar.. :O)) Thanks a lot for leaving me this heartwarming comment...here's a kiss and hug ,fresh and hot from Pinas!! :O))

Tim Smith

Date: 5/21/2014 9:42:00 AM

Quite lovely AiyaH...hugs Tim

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/21/2014 12:15:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Tim~~~