Aiyah Torres Poet Couplet

The Whisper of Wind

Come to me and lay down your wearies,
              In the bed of rose petals rest appease.

          The soft  voice of siren will send you in to bliss.
      'Til you close your eyes and start dreaming in peace.

           Dance with me, I'll take you in heavenly place.
       Where angels and fairies singing a song of praise.

                   Fly high and touch the ceiling of sky.
             Feel the pleasure within of nature's lullaby.





written: 5/21/2014
Contest name: it's all about nature #3
Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A

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Arthur Vaso June 19, 2014 at 8:33 PM I shall whisper to you that this is a beautiful poem!!!

Andrea Dietrich June 2, 2014 at 5:14 PM what a sweet lullaby, SO good to see this one from you, and thanks for supporting my blog.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 2, 2014 at 4:36 AM wow! ang galing ng lines!!! love the combination of nature and serenity, the outcome is a beauty.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta May 27, 2014 at 6:41 AM Congratulations on the win with this wonderful write on nature, Aiyah

Tim Smith May 25, 2014 at 3:13 PM Stopping back with congratulations on this beauty...hugs Tim Aiyah Torres May 26, 2014 at 9:28 PM Thanks a lot, Sir Tim!!! :O))

Paul Callus May 25, 2014 at 1:56 PM I think you have persuaded me to come along, too:) Lovely write, AiyaH! Congrats on a fine win. // paul

Poet Destroyer A May 25, 2014 at 12:42 PM Aiyah, Congratulations, I hope you enjoy your win and placement. Stop by my blog, "Petals in the Wind" if you like. Have a sweet Sunday.... XOX~ Linda

Len Gasun May 25, 2014 at 3:19 AM A very beautiful poem so sweet and lovely in my ears my dear friend AiyaH. You write so well. Thank u so much for sharing. I love it so much. I'm sure this will win. Good luck my dear friend. Biggest hugs! love lots, Leonora Aiyah Torres May 25, 2014 at 3:40 AM thanks a lot my dear friend Leo...Your comment really made my day... You lift me high... especially now that I'm in my dying moment.. wish to have you sometimes.. to chat w/ u and speak what's on my heart... I'm happy for a friendship I've found in you... many hugs and kisses for you.... stay sweet and pretty hearted one.. ^_^

Justin Bordner May 22, 2014 at 8:43 PM Victory in a voice of entwining love, then the Siren gets her prize. I'm excited over the rich imagery in this poem, and the warming voice allaying a man's strain and need for glory. J.A.B. Aiyah Torres May 23, 2014 at 6:23 PM Thanks for this winning comment, J.A.B.!!! :O))

Poet Destroyer A May 21, 2014 at 7:03 PM such a beautiful whisper my awesome friend, Aiyah, i'm only taking a quick peek... Love this already...Linda Aiyah Torres May 23, 2014 at 6:22 PM Thank you, PD!!! ... I appreciate your time commenting on my little piece... ^_^ and for giving me a chance to be part of your contest.. :O))) big hug!!!

Arlene Smith May 21, 2014 at 4:24 PM Aiyah, once again I am humbled that ones of you who can so beautifully craft a piece take time to give my writings a read... Aiyah Torres May 23, 2014 at 6:19 PM Thank you for this wonderful message... I deeply appreciate it... :O))

Nathan D. May 21, 2014 at 12:06 PM good luck in contest you should place high or win with this great poem Aiyah Torres May 21, 2014 at 12:12 PM Hi Nathan.. thanks a lot for your support!!! ..I remember, you held a contest before where I joined too...Thanks again!!! ..:O)) Wish you're doing well... ^_^

Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2014 at 11:39 AM - A soothing and beautiful lullaby from nature smells - I wish you good luck in contest dear friend AiyaH - two thumbs up for your poem: The Whisper of Wind - <3 U !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Aiyah Torres May 21, 2014 at 12:14 PM Hi my dearest friend, Anne!! .. it's a pleasure to see your beautiful eye on your avatar.. :O)) Thanks a lot for leaving me this heartwarming comment...here's a kiss and hug ,fresh and hot from Pinas!! :O))

Tim Smith May 21, 2014 at 9:42 AM Quite lovely AiyaH...hugs Tim Aiyah Torres May 21, 2014 at 12:15 PM Thanks a lot, Tim~~~

Keith O.J. Hunt May 21, 2014 at 9:22 AM Simply beautiful Aiyah! Faving this honey! very effective expression....:-) Keith Aiyah Torres May 21, 2014 at 9:24 AM WOW!!! ..thank you so much Keith!!! :O)) my pleasure to serve you my little piece.. ^_^