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The Whisper of the Wind

 THE WHISPER OF THE WIND


                                The whisper of the wind
                                Persistently traveling in the vast ocean
                                Strongly conquering the odds
                                Firmly reciting:  I need to go through!

                               The whisper of the wind
                               Intensely kissing my heart, my soul
                               Insanely dancing, singing
                               Firmly reciting:  I need to go through!

                               The whisper of the wind
                               Passionately touching my ears
                               Gently running in my cheeks, in my lips
                               Firmly reciting: I need to go through!

                              The whisper of the wind
                               Ferociously reciting:  I LOVE YOU!


Dalila  Agtani

Copyright © Dalila Agtani | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/24/2012 5:22:00 AM Congratulations on your featured poem this week Dalila. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/3/2011 7:39:00 AM It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Dalila. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Date: 5/2/2011 9:50:00 AM Hi Dalila! Welcome to poetrySoup. Your poem is awesome. You are a talented poet. Keep it up. -Mohammad Login to Reply

Poet Tacito Date: 5/1/2011 7:53:00 AM Absolutely gorgeous Dalila! It's all about the kisses & touches. Check your Soup Mail when you get a moment. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 5/1/2011 6:24:00 AM Welcome to poetry soup, Dahlia. Your poem is beautiful. I invite you to enter my ongoing contest called For(Four)Beautiful Birds, I think you could write a poem awesome, If you have questions, soupmail me~~ Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/1/2011 5:24:00 AM Lovely write with rhythm on the whisper of the wind with beautiful images, Dalila Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 5/1/2011 12:49:00 AM Smile ~ "Ferociously Reciting: 'I Love You!' Now That's Passion From The Purest of Deepened Hearts, 'Beautiful Love.' Love The Poe &, 'Love The Love;' Love 'Always'" John!:) ~ Login to Reply