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The Whisper of the Wind

THE WHISPER OF THE WIND The whisper of the wind Persistently traveling in the vast ocean Strongly conquering the odds Firmly reciting: I need to go through! The whisper of the wind Intensely kissing my heart, my soul Insanely dancing, singing Firmly reciting: I need to go through! The whisper of the wind Passionately touching my ears Gently running in my cheeks, in my lips Firmly reciting: I need to go through! The whisper of the wind Ferociously reciting: I LOVE YOU! Dalila Agtani

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/24/2012 5:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week Dalila. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/3/2011 7:39:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Dalila. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

Date: 5/2/2011 9:50:00 AM

Hi Dalila! Welcome to poetrySoup. Your poem is awesome. You are a talented poet. Keep it up. -Mohammad

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/1/2011 7:53:00 AM

Absolutely gorgeous Dalila! It's all about the kisses & touches. Check your Soup Mail when you get a moment.

Constance La France

Date: 5/1/2011 6:24:00 AM

Welcome to poetry soup, Dahlia. Your poem is beautiful. I invite you to enter my ongoing contest called For(Four)Beautiful Birds, I think you could write a poem awesome, If you have questions, soupmail me~~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/1/2011 5:24:00 AM

Lovely write with rhythm on the whisper of the wind with beautiful images, Dalila

John Rhinem

Date: 5/1/2011 12:49:00 AM

Smile ~ "Ferociously Reciting: 'I Love You!' Now That's Passion From The Purest of Deepened Hearts, 'Beautiful Love.' Love The Poe &, 'Love The Love;' Love 'Always'" John!:) ~