Dalila Agtani Poet Free verse

The Whisper of the Wind

 THE WHISPER OF THE WIND


                                The whisper of the wind
                                Persistently traveling in the vast ocean
                                Strongly conquering the odds
                                Firmly reciting:  I need to go through!

                               The whisper of the wind
                               Intensely kissing my heart, my soul
                               Insanely dancing, singing
                               Firmly reciting:  I need to go through!

                               The whisper of the wind
                               Passionately touching my ears
                               Gently running in my cheeks, in my lips
                               Firmly reciting: I need to go through!

                              The whisper of the wind
                               Ferociously reciting:  I LOVE YOU!


Dalila  Agtani

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 24, 2012 at 5:22 AM Congratulations on your featured poem this week Dalila. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown May 3, 2011 at 7:39 AM It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Dalila. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

May 2, 2011 at 9:50 AM Hi Dalila! Welcome to poetrySoup. Your poem is awesome. You are a talented poet. Keep it up. -Mohammad

Poet Tacito May 1, 2011 at 7:53 AM Absolutely gorgeous Dalila! It's all about the kisses & touches. Check your Soup Mail when you get a moment.

Constance La France May 1, 2011 at 6:24 AM Welcome to poetry soup, Dahlia. Your poem is beautiful. I invite you to enter my ongoing contest called For(Four)Beautiful Birds, I think you could write a poem awesome, If you have questions, soupmail me~~

Dr.Ram Mehta May 1, 2011 at 5:24 AM Lovely write with rhythm on the whisper of the wind with beautiful images, Dalila

John Rhinem May 1, 2011 at 12:49 AM Smile ~ "Ferociously Reciting: 'I Love You!' Now That's Passion From The Purest of Deepened Hearts, 'Beautiful Love.' Love The Poe &, 'Love The Love;' Love 'Always'" John!:) ~