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This is a true story. The woman's name, Tabiel Lipskier. The rabbi's name, Menachem Mendel Schneerson, the seventh Lubavitcher Rebbe. 

  
     Despairing of lightening her mood
        ten children her burden
        her life spent
          pushing and tugging 
          at a grindstone 
          of darkest despair

     She wrote of her misery
        to an elderly rabbi in Brooklyn

     He promptly wrote back
     words of encouragement 
        most unexpected advice
        
     “Attend every wedding in town
      Dance every dance
      Whirl like the wind
      Draw others into your circle”

     The desperate women did just that
     Her life changing by the week
       as she drew her new friends
       into her ever-widening circle

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Date: 7/22/2025 11:32:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "The 'Whirlwind" write. Weddings and friends can be great fun. Good Ending... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
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Date: 7/22/2025 3:31:00 AM
engaging poem and touching story. Appreciate the wisdom.
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Date: 7/21/2025 9:47:00 PM
Very nice, Gershon!
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Date: 7/21/2025 9:30:00 PM
Sad situation, but nice outcome from good advice. gw Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. BB
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/22/2025 8:09:00 PM
Always a privilege to post 'em, Bill. ~ gw

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