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One had better not persist in holding back his many tears of suffering for there is always the danger him to be drown into the whirlpool of grief! © Demetrios Trifiatis 15 APRIL 2020

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Date: 4/16/2020 6:10:00 PM
This one needed to be written as Gods word is not always heard from inside that whirlpool. Hope you have opened some eyes in time. This message at this time is no coincidence to me. Possibly you had help but you chose to post it so I commend you for your delivery and wording. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 4/15/2020 10:02:00 AM
So true Demetrios, holding back leads to anxiety and stress, the pressure becomes too much. Nature's way of releasing the tension within. Tom
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Date: 4/15/2020 10:30:00 AM
Glad we are in agreement my friend, Tom. Thank you. God bless you.
Date: 4/15/2020 9:37:00 AM
Tears lead to relief..never good to hold back for long. Awesome flower.
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Date: 4/15/2020 9:49:00 AM
Thank you dear, Vijay. Blessings. Take care.
Date: 4/15/2020 7:07:00 AM
Whirlpool of grief.. Wonderful expression..As sweat reduces the heat of the body, tears lessen the torture of mind.. Great verse..
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Date: 4/15/2020 7:28:00 AM
Thank you for your comment and for well put analogy dearest, Jenish! Take good care my friend! Hugs xxx

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