The Wheel of Good Men

When times are tough - survival fought
Bread and circus come to naught
Do we need hard work and thought?
No. Just a good man

Theory needs some evidence
Faith ignores this - that's its strength
Leaps of logic - any length
Believe the good man

Listen close to his solution
Break the chains of destitution
Rise together! Revolution!
Follow the good man

There is no grey - just black and white
Choose whose side you want to fight
We will set our world alight
All for the good man

With truth and lies and sword and gun
The battle's fought - the war is won
But the work is far from done
Hail the good man

We bring order - must be cruel
Wheat from chaff - we need a tool
Divide all men - judge by our rule
Fear the good man

Do not kill but love your brother
Do not steal and do not covet
Unless he says to do the other
Obey the good man

We must educate the young
Burn the books except our one
Hymns and anthems will be sung
Raised by the good man

Pick a group and call them names
Pose no danger - often blamed
Kill them now! They're all the same!
Hate for the good man

Times are tough - we suffer pain
Do we work and use our brains?
Or revolution turns again?
There's always another good man



Entry for "a good man" contest - re-entered for "your best rhyming poem 2" contest

Written 29th October 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/24/2016 10:24:00 PM
Talent went into this write. It is a poem I appreciate and enjoyed, even read aloud to my good man. Your impressive job has earned my sincere congrats and I'm happy 'bout that ... CayCay
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Mark Martin
Date: 11/25/2016 3:22:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. Glad you both enjoyed it! :-)
Date: 11/24/2016 9:54:00 PM
Wow this is really good, Mark, this really take the idea of "good man" to a deeper level. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/25/2016 3:19:00 PM
Thank you Rebecca for taking the time to read this. Glad you enjoyed! :-)
Date: 11/24/2016 9:07:00 PM
So many questions in this poem, i loved the different perspectives. congratulations on your win Mark
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Mark Martin
Date: 11/25/2016 3:18:00 PM
Thanks Lewis - glad you enjoyed! :-)
Date: 10/29/2016 6:47:00 PM
Good one Mark - Good luck in the contest :)
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Mark Martin
Date: 10/30/2016 5:57:00 PM
Thanks Heidi :-)
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