The Well - Rondel Prime Or French Sonnet

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My mind follows, where heart can not lead, Thriving on pain,inside me,is an empty well I think I've found a way out of this dread, To stop pain, from my past to dwell. Wounds can now be healed,no longer bred, Don't bother to call me,I sent you to hell My mind follows, where heart can not lead, Thriving on pain,inside me, is an empty well. Love is buried now and from you have fled, Never to be found again,no more is to tell No longer I am under your cruel spell, Tired of playing your games, rather be dead My mind follows,where heart can not lead, Thriving on pain,inside me,is an empty well. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2005 October,27,2014

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Date: 10/30/2014 1:59:00 PM
touching deep beautiful pen dorian bless you love always shine purity and beauty in the end dear friend
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:19:00 PM
Thank you so kindly,Liam,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D
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