The Weight of the World

It saddens me
To read poems of our poets
Anguish of life
And society knows it
 
The threat of eviction
Because no jobs can pay
Multi conglomerates
Stand in our way
 
Their tall buildings
Overlook our homes
Shadowing the poor
Savings they comb
 
Destitute families
Looking for a way out
Administration
Give them a shout
 
We voted you in
To change for the good
No wonder so many
Have to turned to the hood
 
The weight of the world
Is on us all
But the ones at the top
They rarely fall
 
So Corporate America
And corporates worldwide
You wouldn't be there
Without us, by your side


Written after reading James Peranteau's poem " I'll loose my little Son "
whilst listening to Tommy Shaw's  " The Weight of the World "



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/6/2009 5:41:00 AM
What a beautiful way to show a friend your heart James this is just beautiful the thought, sad the poem ... love Jayne x x
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Date: 9/2/2009 5:46:00 PM
James, be sure James Peranteau sees this poem. I think it will reassure him that there are people who care. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/2/2009 5:45:00 PM
I, too, was moved greatly by James' fears of losing Noah. He is such a wonderful father. I'm beginning to wonder if we can find any leaders who can get us out of this financial mess. So many people I know are struggling. God bless you for reminding us that corporate America "wouldn't be there without us by (their) side." Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/29/2009 3:44:00 PM
Nice subject matter, James may get a lot worse before better. Good write, witty on your part. Sincerely Moses
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Date: 8/29/2009 3:39:00 PM
Nicley written, James. Some people in America are really having a difficult time while others are safely secure or are they. Keep writing. Sara
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