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The Weight of a Word

Don’t crown yourself solid If your loyalty only echoes in empty rooms, Spoken loud but hollow, Like a drum with no rhythm, Like a prayer with no soul. Keep your promises like weapons— Clean, sharp, Loaded with intention, Ready to be drawn when the world tests your name. Not just drawn, But fired with conviction. Because trust is a fragile beast— Once wounded, it limps, Once broken, it dies. And when someone learns That your word is just smoke— That your vows float, Untethered from action, Detached from meaning— Then you, too, become weightless. No matter how strong your voice sounds, If your integrity whispers lies, You will vanish in silence, Forgotten not by accident— But by design. So be solid not in noise, But in stillness that speaks. Be the echo that returns Because it had substance to begin with. Be the promise that never had to shout— Because it never broke.

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Date: 7/25/2025 10:55:00 AM
Wow! Enjoyed very much!
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Date: 7/18/2025 5:37:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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