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The Wedding Ring

" one piece of diamond ring,"    

                 leads to a milestone journey.   







Written by: AiyaH De Torres
Entry for :Just Ten Words Poetry Contest by nette onclaud
4/8/2014

** 6th place Winner**

Copyright © Aiyah Torres | Year Posted 2014

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Jan Allison Date: 4/14/2014 3:52:00 AM congrats on a fine win hugs Jan x Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/14/2014 7:24:00 AM Thank you ,Jan!! :O)

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/14/2014 1:20:00 AM brilliant take on the theme of stones. congrats on a fine win, aiyah Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/14/2014 7:24:00 AM My honor... Thank you so much, Dr. Ram!! :O))

Skat A Date: 4/13/2014 8:26:00 PM I love this Aiyah......SKAT Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/14/2014 7:25:00 AM I love you more, SKAT!!! THank you so much dear friend!! =D

Tim Smith Date: 4/13/2014 7:16:00 PM Congrats on your placement AiyaH !!!!!....Hugs Tim Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/14/2014 7:26:00 AM Hey Tim... THank you so much!!! :))

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/13/2014 4:35:00 PM a good thought in this one. Congrats for your win. Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/14/2014 7:27:00 AM ThaNk you so much, Andie!!! ..you're such a sweet friend!! :O)) big hugs... ^_^

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/13/2014 2:40:00 PM Wonderful thot on milestone journey thru exchange of precious stones !! Congrats on win Aiyah ! Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/14/2014 7:28:00 AM My honor, Dr. Upma... Thank you so much for your warm message!! :)))

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/13/2014 1:14:00 PM - A poem about STONES in just 10 words - not easy - but it was a lot of good poems nevertheless - Congratulations on your winning poem, dear AiyaH !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/14/2014 7:29:00 AM my dearest Anne Lise... The precious stone we have here in PSoup.. :O)) Thank you so much for this kind message... I love you a lot!!! ^__^

Verlena S. Walker Date: 4/13/2014 1:07:00 PM Congratulations on your winning in just ten words contest Aiyah. Nice piece... Verlena Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/14/2014 7:32:00 AM Thank you so much ,VErlena.. !! :O))

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/10/2014 8:47:00 AM For some a blessing for others a curse. Some travel a mile some carry the ring to eternity. I enjoyed your thought provoking piece. Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/10/2014 9:18:00 AM yeah ,Rick... the sweetest truth of being married. .. Oh wow!! ...it's raining comments from you today.. THank you so much!! ^__^

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/9/2014 8:59:00 AM Good morning Aiyah, a ring of a lifetime. I'm wondering if this is for a contest. Thank you for the delightful poem... Linda Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/9/2014 10:56:00 AM Good morning ,PD... :")) I hope all thing's fine for you..!! I plan to join it in nette's contest.. he he.. Thank you for the visit my sweetest ever friend, Linda!!! ...:O))

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 4/8/2014 4:45:00 PM It could lead to the end of life and beyond...! Enjoy life's voyage with ring on your finger, a smile on your face and happiness in your heart dear Aiyah! As beautiful a poem as your ring! Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/9/2014 8:24:00 AM Yes Demetrios... the end of life and beyond... I hope all couples can survive this milestone together, whether it's a diamond or not.. ^__^ Thank you for this wonderful comment!! :O))

Paul Callus Date: 4/8/2014 3:37:00 PM Very good poem in ten words AiyaH....the story of a lifetime!! // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/13/2014 12:52:00 PM congrats AiyaH on fine placing. :) // paul Aiyah Torres Date: 4/8/2014 3:54:00 PM Thank you, Paul!! You always surprised me with a comment like this!! ..:"))

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/8/2014 2:07:00 PM - I have "only" three small diamonds in my wedding ring ..... - .... and it's still sitting on my fing and have "traveled many mil" .... - Unique wedding ring poem AiyaH my friend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/8/2014 2:19:00 PM Oh Lise... You are so lucky to have one... I nver had a diamond ring... but w/ a miles my life is heading w/ the love of my family, kids...I feel like wearring ten in my fingers!!! Thanks for a kind visit my sweet ever friend.. labyah!!! :"))

Tim Smith Date: 4/8/2014 1:09:00 PM That is one mighty big ring. Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/8/2014 1:46:00 PM thank you!! ^_^ Tim Smith Date: 4/8/2014 1:36:00 PM Usually 24 carats refers to gold. A big diamond ring is 2-3 carats. Most are around 1. Aiyah Torres Date: 4/8/2014 1:30:00 PM lol... I didn't intend to made it that big... so what supposed to be the right size?.. :'))