Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

The Wayra Rotunda

THE WAYRA ROTUNDA

        nascent electric,
mint rotunda reds and blues —
spiffy underground tunnel.
   subway smoke infiltrates. . .
      the fauvism of clickety clack

8/15/2019
SECOND EDITION OF WAYRA Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
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Caren Krutsinger August 17, 2019 at 9:20 AM "clickety clack" - brought this poem to life to me, for I was confused until I saw it. Then I went back for another read and it all "clickety clacked" in place. This is what happens when Trixie is tired of reading poetry. Kim Rodrigues August 17, 2019 at 9:46 AM Thank you, Caren! :)

Kurt Ravidas August 16, 2019 at 12:57 PM A spiffy underground poem) By the way, I found the artist: Len Cicio. The New-York subway is clickety fauvistic. The Moscow one is not. I wish you win, Kim. As usual) Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2019 at 5:41 PM Thank you, Kurt! :)

Reason A. Poteet August 16, 2019 at 11:45 AM Beyond the edge of wayra, I am impressed by your imagery here. WOW is right! Best of luck, Kim. Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2019 at 5:42 PM Thank you, Reason!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2019 at 8:40 AM - Excellent, Kim ... Wooow, a fantastic contribution - A winner ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2019 at 9:52 AM That means a lot coming from you, sweet poet! <3 Kim

Tom Cunningham August 16, 2019 at 1:51 AM Love your interpretation of the image Kim, I'm still staring at it lol. Good luck. Tom Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2019 at 7:49 AM Thank you, Tom!