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The Wayra Rotunda

THE WAYRA ROTUNDA nascent electric, mint rotunda reds and blues — spiffy underground tunnel. subway smoke infiltrates. . . the fauvism of clickety clack 8/15/2019 SECOND EDITION OF WAYRA Poetry Contest Sponsor: Nette Onclaud checked by howmanysyllables.com 57768

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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 9:20:00 AM
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"clickety clack" - brought this poem to life to me, for I was confused until I saw it. Then I went back for another read and it all "clickety clacked" in place. This is what happens when Trixie is tired of reading poetry.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2019 9:46:00 AM
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Thank you, Caren! :)
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 8/16/2019 12:57:00 PM
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A spiffy underground poem) By the way, I found the artist: Len Cicio. The New-York subway is clickety fauvistic. The Moscow one is not. I wish you win, Kim. As usual)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2019 5:41:00 PM
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Thank you, Kurt! :)
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 8/16/2019 11:45:00 AM
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Beyond the edge of wayra, I am impressed by your imagery here. WOW is right! Best of luck, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2019 5:42:00 PM
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Thank you, Reason!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/16/2019 8:40:00 AM
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- Excellent, Kim ... Wooow, a fantastic contribution - A winner ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2019 9:52:00 AM
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That means a lot coming from you, sweet poet! <3 Kim
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/16/2019 1:51:00 AM
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Love your interpretation of the image Kim, I'm still staring at it lol. Good luck. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2019 7:49:00 AM
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Thank you, Tom!

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