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The Way You Look At Me

Million dreams bear wings ___ fly like fireflies ___ as your soul's windows knock on mine Your stare fixed on my face... Set my heart ablaze... Make me swim in your eyes ________________________ (couldn't choose one... Lol) 3rd April, 2021 For JCB Burl's 'The Way You Look at Me' ~Monoku poetry contest. Placement in the contest___1 Placed in Brian Strand's "ALL YOURS(May 3)" contest as well

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Date: 5/7/2021 12:16:00 PM
I love the first...especially the first line of the monoku...congrats on your win.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/7/2021 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Jeanne
Date: 5/5/2021 12:01:00 PM
I love both monoku, Paghunda ...very romantic, and I am not surprised that you won! Congratulations. ~ Regards // paul
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/6/2021 4:01:00 PM
That's for the kind comment
Date: 5/4/2021 5:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with these enchanting monokus, Paghunda. Blessings, Evelyn
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/4/2021 6:36:00 PM
Thanks Evelyn... Stay blessed!
Date: 5/4/2021 9:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful/wonderful. I love your write. Have a blessed day..................
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/4/2021 11:52:00 AM
Thanks Paula
Date: 5/4/2021 7:33:00 AM
Nice one... or two, Paghunda
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/4/2021 11:52:00 AM
Two Monkus ;)
Date: 5/4/2021 5:07:00 AM
Two good monoku. Congrats on your win in the first contest. They read like good contenders in Brian's contest as well. Way to go. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/4/2021 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Sara. And congratulations to you too
Date: 5/4/2021 3:35:00 AM
WoW! Paghunda, You said so much in a few words. I found it to be very romantic. Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/4/2021 6:03:00 AM
Really nice of you Alex is... Thank you
Date: 5/3/2021 11:33:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/4/2021 6:02:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 5/3/2021 6:55:00 PM
iI pick the stars! ~ Sands on the Seashore
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/4/2021 6:03:00 AM
Sounds shway
Date: 5/2/2021 6:01:00 PM
A good one, Paghunda. Good luck!
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/4/2021 6:03:00 AM
Thanks

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