The Way To Gleams

A mother's love may visit pain
If one child's hope looses its dream
A chasm deep in her soul screams.
Oh God, please let his faith remain.

Youthful goals and priorities
Can cloud love's path eternally.
Forgive forgotten boundaries.
Trust in God move onward boldly.

Lofty thinking, respect askew –
Browbeaten and misunderstood.
Before too long joy says, “adieu.”
Remember let not evil brood.

But seek the light and trust His Word.
Cherish life and integrity.
Be not afraid soft voices heard.
Give all for love and selflessly.

Fear not the loss of future fame.
But seek to melt your soul in love.
Success becomes an earthly game.
But families are from God above. 

So when, my child you feel great pains,
Ask God above to show you dreams. 
Be sure that faith in God remains.
He knows the path to love and gleams.

© July 26, 2010
Dane Smith-Johnsen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/27/2010 6:20:00 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Constance"The Rambling Poet's" contest "Gosh,That Was Fast". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2010 5:07:00 PM
Written from the soft heart of a mother. Lcongratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/26/2010 3:57:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem in Gosh it went so fast contest... a wonderful write and another win for u to enjoy my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/26/2010 11:29:00 AM
Great advice from mother to child...Excellent topic that you have chosen on which to write..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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