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The Way Things Really Were

O, the nights we couldn't stop sweating the porch no cooler than our rooms Enervated, we drove down to the lake where 'shore patrol' lowered the boom All those appliances that too often failed jalopies that wouldn't start in the cold Lights flickering with each drop of rain all those folks who at 50 were old Yet this is not what we choose to remember 'coz memory, thank God, is selective If not, who would ever reminisce over things as they were ~ so defective

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Date: 5/1/2021 5:42:00 PM
Hello Gershon ... how true, but I must admit thinking back to my teens when I claimed forty was old - thanks Gershon - Lindsay
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Date: 4/30/2021 2:34:00 PM
Yeah, but if three of your buddies pushed it.....fast enough....you could start the old stick shift....
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Date: 4/30/2021 7:15:00 AM
Gershon, Fine reminiscing in Rhyme. I miss all those perfect imperfections. A reflection of who we were and how far we had to go, perhaps. -Richard
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Date: 4/30/2021 3:28:00 AM
Thanks for the memories! " jalopies that wouldn't start in the cold" For sure!
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Date: 4/30/2021 5:57:00 AM
No bed of roses, the past. Only in retrospect. (Hindsight is nowhere near '20/20). ~ gw
Date: 4/29/2021 8:04:00 PM
While reading this, my 2012 Fiat 500 came to my mind. It let me down too many times with breakdowns and costly repair bills. Nice write as usual, Gershon.
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Date: 4/30/2021 5:58:00 AM
Sure enough. Cars today are much better than they used to be. :) gw

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