The Way of Bliss

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The scarlet path of big, full blown roses, Intersects with the golden Buttercup Lane, And takes a wild turn at Bluebell Road, Where a deep violet blue color explodes! Nearby is scented, lacy Queen Anne's Place, A short distance from Green Daisy Trail. That was the place I last lost my heart! Across the field is Scarlet Pimpernel Way, That traverses deep orange Marigold Street, Where a sunflower sun chases shadows away! Written on May 9, 2021 For: Nature Poetry Contest Sponsor: Regina McIntosh

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/10/2021 8:58:00 PM

Evelyn, No better place to lose a heart than Green Daisy's Trail. All those roads and paths intersecting in true kaleidoscope bliss. -Richard

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/11/2021 11:15:00 AM

I am happy that you visited the Way of Bliss, Richard. Thank you for your appreciation. Blessings, Evelyn

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/10/2021 2:25:00 AM

Great poem, dear Evelyn; your words resonate with the sounds of nature; I wish you good luck in the contest have a great Monday

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/10/2021 10:53:00 AM

Thank you very much for the compliment and kind well wishes, Lasaad. I am happy you feel that way. Blessings :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/9/2021 10:55:00 PM

Loved the way you named each street with a flower. Quite original. Best for a win.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/10/2021 10:55:00 AM

That makes me feel just super. Thank you for a lovely comment.