Barbara Gorelick Poet Free verse

The Way

The path winds along the mountain.
Thinking only of the destination
Our feet move with purpose.
Expectations grow with each step.

Our life path winds along the mountain
Our life is the path, the journey,
The view our daily gift.
Listen to the mountain music.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire April 29, 2009 at 11:25 PM Dear LOVE Barbara Jean, thought YOU said YOU didn't live on a mountain YOU definitely paint a perfect mountain path and gift of the view I listen to the mountain music daily LOVE YOU with all my Heart ALWAYS YOURS...HG

Carrie Richards April 26, 2009 at 8:36 AM You paint such a lovely view...of life ..of nature...we should pay attention to the beauty of both. Love, Carrie

Daver Austin April 26, 2009 at 5:53 AM Great imagination. This reminds me of Cezanne and his mountain. I love the mountain as symbol also. Love, daver

Carolyn Devonshire April 25, 2009 at 8:24 PM Very nice, Barbara! Reminds me of the saying, "Life is a journey, enjoy the ride." We would all do well to "Listen to the mountain music" as we move forward "with purpose."