The Waxed Coat Man

In crackled tintypes bent with long ago,
Amid flaxen sunset and skies of cherry—
In worn leather-carved ancient scenario,
He dare not lie in milkweed prairie.

He rides resolute toward that sweat-tinged fame,
Always the heart’s hero of our once young eye,
As pale ivory range sighs softly his name
And we all know the real reason why.

It is high sage country that he will ride,
As that tin sun burns alabaster away—
And new birthed rains roll off his cow rancher hide,
So his soft summer’s mirage will stay.

Some see him crude – of but limited worth—
Lacking pure knowledge or certain savoir-faire—
But born of bone plain, he is of no fool’s birth—
A force of nature that’s always there. 

From coat’s patina past years slide, of course,
As lines are spurred so deep into his Sphinx face—
But he’d rather be poised high atop his horse
In no other country, time or place.

His heritage is long – it’s here he’ll die—
He rides his own land in cruel spring rains and snows—
And like that wax jacket, he’ll keep his hopes dry,
Because ranching is all that he knows.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Tate Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 5:08 AM
Glenn, you have a thoughtful poem here. Glad I saw it this morning.
Shetley Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 10:43 PM
Truly a poem of beauty, what a wonderful write!
Mason Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 10:13 PM
Awesome writing with beautiful imagery. A well-deserved selection to have won the PoetrySoup contest! Congratulations, Glen!!
Slaughter Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 11:51 AM
That was a beautiful poem, well written, and congratulations on your winning, it certainly deserved it!
Fontes Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 8:13 PM
Oh my God i only started doing poetry about a year ago and this goes way past me!Buttah I don't get it... at all
Sanders Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 2:58 PM
Wonderful write, so thick in living description. Congrats on the win!
Ryoo Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 8:40 PM
Wonderfully put... Congratulations on your winning!
Blakeley Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 2:50 PM
very complicated and beautiful !!
Mascarenhas Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 4:36 AM
nice.... cheers oscar
Aggarwal Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 1:30 AM
Brilliance!
Arnold Avatar
April 2, 2010 at 7:47 PM
Congrats on your win with this outstanding piece Love Cookie
Walker Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 6:28 PM
UuHhh..congrats,buttah..i don't get it..at all
Peranteau Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 7:35 AM
Mr. enloe......wonderful "Cowboy"...I've often wanted to write one. Congratulations on your spectacular win Sir !! This should be a proud moment for you...God bless you with your poetic talent ! james
Tugaff Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 9:21 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Enjoy the honor. I enjoyed reading this piece of art. Ernilando
Paul Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 11:51 AM
an amazing write rife with picturesque metaphors that give life and colorful meaning to the storied life of the cowboy/rancher...excellent! cheers, Pablo
Muzzey Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 9:05 AM
Congratulations on your win in the soup contest, a well deserved first place win. Caryl
Kendrick Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 7:34 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest..Hope that this just one of many and many to come...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Esquire Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 6:17 AM
Dear Glen, Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved 1st Place Win in the October POETRYSOUP Contest This made me Think of Clint Eastwood In "The Outlaw - Josey Wells" SUPER WRITE ALWAYS...HG
Haick Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 1:08 PM
Glen, my congratulations on your awesome win in PS's International contest! Great job!!
Alldredge Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 3:09 PM
Congratulations in everyway possiable on this work of art. My husband even sat and listen to me as I read it aloud to my friend. He never does that. Totally LOVED it.
Palli Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 7:44 AM
Congratulaions on your wonderful work of art.
Freeman Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations on your first place win Glen. Awesome poem and form. Agape, Moses
Mossburg Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 3:09 AM
I really like this. It brings such visually vivid pictures and evokes such deep emotion. Thanks for sharing this.
Riley Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 10:29 AM
Glen , great poem, makes me miss my Grandpa. Our country was formed on this type of people, salt of the earth. I love this poem, you deserve the prize. Judy Riley
Brown Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 8:48 AM
CONGRATULATIONS Glen on your winning the PoetrySoup International Poetry Site Contest for October 2009. This has been along time coming my friend and it is fantastic seeing your name up there finally in the spotlight. Love you my friend, Carol
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