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The Wave Rolled In

The wave rolled in on a gentle wind A promise born, soon to begin The plea of love across your face My heart's tide did surely grace Cresting now, this fulsome wave With deepest eyes of blue engraved Breaking softly on the shore Of love eternal, evermore

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Date: 11/4/2018 12:26:00 PM
I love the way the wave of love comes over you in this poem, Gershon. We always hope it will last eternally and the luckiest lovers do endure. Very nicely composed. Hugs, Carolyn
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/4/2018 6:50:00 PM
Appreciate your positive feedback and encouragement, Carolyn! ~ Gershon
Date: 11/4/2018 10:01:00 AM
Very romantic verse Gershon, love the nautical feel of it. Tom.c
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Date: 11/4/2018 6:50:00 PM
Aye, aye mate! :) gw

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