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The Water's Flow

The water trickles
    Over the rocks it tickles
         Moving and falling
    Into the clear pool below
Merging with calm flowing sound

Heidi Sands

4/13/19

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Darlene De Beaulieu

June 25, 2019 at 12:21 PM

Hello Heidi, oh such a lovely poem. I like the sound of rushing water. It is peaceful to me. have a nice day my friend.

Heidi Sands

June 25, 2019 at 12:31 PM

Hi Darlene. I appreciate your comment on this. I agree, it is very peaceful to hear the water. I hope you have a nice day as well. Thank you :)

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

April 30, 2019 at 7:33 AM

great imagery. nicely done

Heidi Sands

April 30, 2019 at 8:14 AM

Thank you Allen :)

M. L. Kiser

April 15, 2019 at 8:04 PM

This almost had me dancing with the water. Lovely.

Heidi Sands

April 16, 2019 at 7:27 AM

Nice to hear M.L. I appreciate your comments. Thank you :)

Gershon Wolf

April 14, 2019 at 12:43 PM

Here's a riddle for you. Question: What does a rock say when it's tickled? Answer: Ask Heidi Sands! ... Just adore those first two lines of your poem!! :) gw

Heidi Sands

April 14, 2019 at 12:58 PM

LOL Your comment has me laughing. Thanks Gershon :)