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The Water's Flow

The water trickles
    Over the rocks it tickles
         Moving and falling
    Into the clear pool below
Merging with calm flowing sound

Heidi Sands

4/13/19

Copyright © Heidi Sands | Year Posted 2019

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/25/2019 12:21:00 PM Hello Heidi, oh such a lovely poem. I like the sound of rushing water. It is peaceful to me. have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 6/25/2019 12:31:00 PM Hi Darlene. I appreciate your comment on this. I agree, it is very peaceful to hear the water. I hope you have a nice day as well. Thank you :)

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. Date: 4/30/2019 7:33:00 AM great imagery. nicely done Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/30/2019 8:14:00 AM Thank you Allen :)

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 4/20/2019 10:17:00 AM I can hear the water trickling. Love the imagery. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/20/2019 10:44:00 AM That is nice to know you can hear it. I appreciate your comments :)

M. L. Kiser Date: 4/15/2019 8:04:00 PM This almost had me dancing with the water. Lovely. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/16/2019 7:27:00 AM Nice to hear M.L. I appreciate your comments. Thank you :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 4/14/2019 12:43:00 PM Here's a riddle for you. Question: What does a rock say when it's tickled? Answer: Ask Heidi Sands! ... Just adore those first two lines of your poem!! :) gw Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/14/2019 12:58:00 PM LOL Your comment has me laughing. Thanks Gershon :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/14/2019 11:40:00 AM I love the sound of water! This gave me a peaceful moment. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/14/2019 11:44:00 AM Great to hear that Richard. Thank you :)

Winged Warrior Date: 4/14/2019 11:20:00 AM A beautiful flow of words dear Heidi...happy endings...^WW^...{*J*} Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/14/2019 11:29:00 AM Thank you WW. I appreciate your kind comment. Have a great day :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 4/14/2019 10:12:00 AM Melodic Tanka dearest, Heidi! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/14/2019 10:17:00 AM Thank you Demetrios :)