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The Water's Flow

The water trickles Over the rocks it tickles Moving and falling Into the clear pool below Merging with calm flowing sound Heidi Sands 4/13/19

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/25/2019 12:21:00 PM

Hello Heidi, oh such a lovely poem. I like the sound of rushing water. It is peaceful to me. have a nice day my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/25/2019 12:31:00 PM

Hi Darlene. I appreciate your comment on this. I agree, it is very peaceful to hear the water. I hope you have a nice day as well. Thank you :)

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/30/2019 7:33:00 AM

great imagery. nicely done

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/30/2019 8:14:00 AM

Thank you Allen :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 4/20/2019 10:17:00 AM

I can hear the water trickling. Love the imagery.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/20/2019 10:44:00 AM

That is nice to know you can hear it. I appreciate your comments :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/15/2019 8:04:00 PM

This almost had me dancing with the water. Lovely.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/16/2019 7:27:00 AM

Nice to hear M.L. I appreciate your comments. Thank you :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/14/2019 12:43:00 PM

Here's a riddle for you. Question: What does a rock say when it's tickled? Answer: Ask Heidi Sands! ... Just adore those first two lines of your poem!! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2019 12:58:00 PM

LOL Your comment has me laughing. Thanks Gershon :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/14/2019 11:40:00 AM

I love the sound of water! This gave me a peaceful moment.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2019 11:44:00 AM

Great to hear that Richard. Thank you :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/14/2019 11:20:00 AM

A beautiful flow of words dear Heidi...happy endings...^WW^...{*J*}

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2019 11:29:00 AM

Thank you WW. I appreciate your kind comment. Have a great day :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/14/2019 10:12:00 AM

Melodic Tanka dearest, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2019 10:17:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios :)