The Waters Edge

I sat down by the waters edge
Felt the breeze against my legs
Dipped my toe, dropped my head
Deemed I’d rather be in bed
How is it so, I just don’t know
Where did my whole life go?

I question everything I think is mine
Always looking for those other times
Where joyful memories are not dead
And why I keep on feeling dread.

Silence creeps up from behind
Gently comes into my mind   
To a loving I have longed to find   
Here I treat myself so kind    
No more hanging down my head
No more wanting to be in bed.

I capture a glimpse of what it's like
To love myself and not be so blind  
For I have lived all this time
Wanting you was my only crime.

Now, I go back to the water's edge
Feel the breeze against my legs
Dip my toe and raise my head.
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September 7, 2026 at 8:34 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 8:25 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
M  Avatar
January 29, 2022 at 6:01 AM
Oh Pauline…..I love this poem so beautifully written. Debx
Downie Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 12:49 AM
thank you Deb :)
Sands Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 6:58 AM
Well written Pauline :)
Downie Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 6:48 PM
Thank you Heidi :)
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