The Waterfall

Cascading vision
channeling it’s own pathway
like stained glass crystals
tripping over polished stones
voiceless but never speechless

09/13/2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Merryman Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 2:05 PM
Beautiful description of a waterfall. Congrats on your win, Liz! Love, Kim
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April 3, 2012 at 10:22 PM
LIZ , Congratulations with your beautiful win, in B E Susan's contest.. Have yourself a good night. :-) , luv~PD
Johnson Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 6:26 PM
Lovely tanka. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Guzzi Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 3:44 PM
Such a unique take on a waterfall! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 10:13 AM
congrats Liz on an awesome win for this spectacular entry luv.. crystal clear beauty ..
Brown Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 9:21 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's contest Liz. Love, Carol
Roske Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 9:08 AM
I can hear the water flow - you paint a nice visual.
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 6:50 AM
Beautiful Liz ! - oxox
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