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The Water Gurgles

As the soapy water is drained from the sink
the water gurgles until it settle in

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V. Deepa

Date: 5/23/2020 10:50:00 AM

Ha ha ..such a humourous one to be pondered upon Overflown with perfect metaphor.:-) It's cute.Well written mam.:-) With regards~Deepa

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/23/2020 12:31:00 PM

Hello Deepa, Deepa thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

Thomas Wells

Date: 5/15/2020 6:56:00 PM

Hi Darlene, Nice job! I wonder when water settles in.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/16/2020 7:14:00 AM

Hello Thomas Wells, I have been wondering that myself. Have a nice day my friend.

Anita Wilson

Date: 4/10/2020 6:38:00 PM

Nice penning. Love the description :-)!!!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/11/2020 7:13:00 AM

Hello Anita Wilson, so nice to see you .I hope all is well with you. Be safe. Enjoy your day my friend.

Charlie Knowlton

Date: 3/30/2020 10:20:00 AM

Love short poems Darlene, especially this one. Could see it going down.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/30/2020 11:40:00 AM

Hello Charlie Knowlton, Hi! I hope all is well.with you. I like short poems to. Be safe, Be well.Be strong, Be healthy. Enjoy your day my friend.

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/23/2020 10:32:00 AM

As we must settle in too, perfect metaphor Darlene, Stay well and healthy xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/23/2020 11:37:00 AM

Hello Mike,yes Mike we must settle in.thank you for the lovely comment. Stay healthy my friend. xxxx-oooo.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/23/2020 7:29:00 AM

I see this often too. Well done Darlene. I hope you are well. Take care :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/23/2020 8:33:00 AM

Hello Heidi, I am getting over a head cold.I wish you well.Yesterday it was Spring and today it is winter. Then tomorrow it will snow. Crazy weather. Enjoy your day my friend.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/22/2020 2:29:00 PM

Darlene, What a nice Monoku. Reminded me that I must wash my hands often. And when I do, I'll see if my sink sings a similar tune. Happy Sunday in sunshine... -Richard

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/22/2020 5:21:00 PM

Hello Quoth The Raven,thank you for the lovely comment. Yes we must wash our hands often. Yes i am sure the sink will sing the similar tune. Be safe, be healthy, Be strong we can get through this ordeal. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/22/2020 11:45:00 AM

Part of our daily chores - clever to make it into a poem. Really great Monoku Blessings dear Darlene Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/22/2020 12:11:00 PM

Hello Jennffer,yes part of our chores. Thank you for the lovely comment.Hugs Darlene stay well my friend enjoy your day.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/22/2020 9:32:00 AM

Hahaha! With coronavirus around it is the right thing to do! Good writing dear Darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/22/2020 12:13:00 PM

Hello Demetrios,thank you my friend. Yes it is the right thing to do. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day. my friend.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/22/2020 12:23:00 AM

Awesome, Monoku, Darlene. I watch this happen quite a few times a day.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/22/2020 8:38:00 AM

Hello Eve Roper, I also watch this happen several times a day. Keep well. Stay safe Enjoy your day my friend.

Sandra Adams

Date: 3/21/2020 9:49:00 AM

i have witnessed this sound, when it gets really windy here it seems to occur sometimes... good one :) enjoy your weekend!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/21/2020 4:55:00 PM

Hello Sandra Adams,the sink drain does this all the time. You hear this sound when it is windy! Now that is interesting. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2020 8:35:00 PM

hmm mine does not do that!! Thanks for the sound effect, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/21/2020 4:57:00 PM

Hello Andrea,Yours does not do this?! Very interesting.You are welcome. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/20/2020 3:58:00 PM

A good poem about a sound that always fascinates me. Panagiota xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/20/2020 5:16:00 PM

Hello Pyeanagiota, yes a poem about a sound we hear every day. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice evening my friend. hugs Darlene xx

Martin Braun

Date: 3/20/2020 1:42:00 PM

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/20/2020 5:18:00 PM

Hello Martin Braun, it is okay you do not understand my poem. if that is the case all you have to do is ask me. I will tell you. Enjoy your evening my friend.