The Water Bearer

He carries a jar, full of water;
water that no one knows its source!

He pours water as he stands beyond
the stars, as Pisces, the twin fish, continue
to rule over their astrological reign
on Earth.

Just like their predecessor, Aries,
they will end their astrological reign, 
when water from the Water
Bearer’s jar reaches Earth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 1:45 AM
It's a logical conclusion if the Aries have strong Mars and good Jupiter, Teddy. congrats
Kimathi Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 3:12 AM
Thank you very much Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
Lindley Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 3:28 PM
Congrats on your win!!
Kimathi Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 3:11 AM
Thank you very much Robert! :-)
Andresen Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 11:39 AM
- Hey Teddy, congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest: Zodiac Sign, sponsored by: Leonora Galinta - A very well written poem! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kimathi Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 3:07 AM
Thank you very much for your sweet and kind applause Anne-Lise! ^_^ <3 <3
Gasun Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 10:23 AM
A very beautiful poem on zodiac sign you’ve penned my dear poet friend,Teddy! I enjoyed thoroughly the read. Congratulations on your great win! So much thanks as well for your loving support. Biggest hugs and cheers! Love lots always, Leonora
Kimathi Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 2:57 AM
You are always very much welcome Leonora! I really enjoyed the contest on my part! Thank you very much for your applause! ^_^ <3 <3
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