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The Watcher

I am quiet I am patient I sit aside But gone unseen To your eyes I am loyal I am honest And stand behind Always catching the tears That you have cried

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John Leong

Date: 9/30/2017 12:16:00 PM

nice! if ever a friend were to be, it'll be like as you have described so well. thanks for the uplifting words. cheers!

Laurie Mahoney

Date: 9/29/2017 12:34:00 PM

I enjoyed this poem. Reminds me of myself. The life of an introvert. :)

James Inman

Date: 8/24/2016 12:09:00 PM

...and who catches your tears? (If you haven't already, check out the forms section at the top of the page, and please know that suggestions from others here are usually meant with good intentions and to be helpful.) A sweet, gentle poem Jessica.

Jessica Zorn
Date: 8/24/2016 1:02:00 PM

Guardian angel or the ghost of loved ones who have past was the perspective I was going for.

Terry Hoffman

Date: 8/23/2016 2:39:00 PM

This is not a rhymed poem. I think you put it in the wrong category

Jessica Zorn
Date: 8/23/2016 7:21:00 PM

What would it be then? Never had formal training in writing they just come so I really don't know what it would be considered. Thank you

Lewis Raynes

Date: 8/2/2016 8:10:00 PM

This is a beautiful short poem, of beautiful thoughts, love it.