The Washing Machine

The washing machine
Swallow all the dirty stuffs
While water flushing in to help
But no bargain
The machine starts to grumble
Until all the dust is digested
And drenched away
Only then whistles happily 
For you to collect
The clean and shining stuffs
As an abiding,satisfying 
And remarkable achievement
Better than a laundry woman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 10/19/2021 12:19:00 PM
Hello SaiLin Lip, the washing machine does its job. When washing scoks and placed in the dryer somehow the other scok is not found. blessing my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/20/2021 10:22:00 AM
Hello Sai Lin, Lip, yes maybe they get stuck somewhere. Nothing else gets stuck only the scoks. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Sai Lin Lip
Date: 10/20/2021 6:07:00 AM
Maybe stucked somewhere. Luckily I didn't have such problem. I am using only the washing device because mine has no attached dryer. Have a better try next day.
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