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The Warring Heights

“Or those eighteen who died when the tower in Siloam fell on them—do you think they were more guilty than all the others living in Jerusalem? I tell you, no! But unless you repent, you too will all perish” (Luke 13:4–5) Sweet bitter bite stirs the tree snake — Eden’s crumbling. The seed of Eve trembling...petals turn white. Adamic-tongue fumbling. Father of lights, his promise to the flailing man — sepulcher - womb of new beginnings, a good plan. Flickering windows! Falling clan. Dueling swords plunge into deep soil — the warring heights. 6/16/2019 Writing Challenge, June 2019, Crumbling Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 6/30/2019 7:14:00 PM
Kim congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write and sorry for my delay in visiting ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/1/2019 7:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance! <3 Kim
Date: 6/30/2019 6:42:00 PM
Very dramatic imagery Kim, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/1/2019 7:57:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! Hugs...Kim
Date: 6/25/2019 10:03:00 PM
I love the title and the dramatic and captivating imagery of your amazing poem, Kim. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2019 6:04:00 AM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 6/25/2019 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2019 6:04:00 AM
Thank you, Jeanne
Date: 6/25/2019 12:04:00 PM
Lots of interesting imagery and thoughts in your poem, Kim. quite original. Congrats for your win. In case you did not hear, I am going to my father's funeral in WA and my sister is picking me up very soon to drive me there. So if you don't hear from me in a while, that is why. have a good week!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2019 12:19:00 PM
So sorry for your loss, Andrea. Prayers for you and your family <3 Kim
Date: 6/18/2019 3:48:00 PM
Frightening, but truely a rendition straight from the book
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/18/2019 9:16:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!

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