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This is another Erasure taken from the text Suzette Richards shared. I enjoy these kind of word puzzles. Now, will I wonder, did I enter the right one?

The Waltz of Time

a celestial dancer,
through the veil of existence, 
paints the cosmos with hues unseen
illuminating constellations 
auroras bow,
the moon dances to dawn’s blush, 
twilight casting shadows upon the land
where miracles bloom.

Enchantress watch,
the universe bends to your will.

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/20/2024 2:15:00 PM

Belated Congrats Suzanne. How beautifully penned. And outsranding image,, to boot! Pangie

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 6/19/2024 9:57:00 AM

great image and a befitting poetry! I believe we humans can only get a brief taste of the creation in our life time! The only way to experience the entirety of it is to be enlightened. That is when we merge with everything there is! Great inspiring write.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/16/2024 9:05:00 AM

wow to both the words and the image Suz, loved it, :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/16/2024 1:25:00 PM

Thanks Vie Good to see you, always. SuZ

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/16/2024 6:06:00 AM

Hi suz...I sorely missed you and your poetry... this gem sparkles with galactic turns of metaphors: a fascinating read...thanks for dropping by...huggs

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/16/2024 6:41:00 AM

Dear Nette: You were also missed and your beautiful poetry. Life gets in the way a lot and yet we keep our friendships close. Hugs back, SuZ

Len Gasun

Date: 6/10/2024 9:44:00 AM

A fabulous write my dear poet friend Suz. Your talent in poetry shines as always. Belated CONGRATULATIONS for a well-deserved POTD. Loving this gem and enjoying it a lot. I'm so glad to read from you again my dear poet friend. Thank you so much. Thank you so much to for your loving visit. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/11/2024 7:31:00 AM

Thanks for your uplifting comment. Always a joy to hear from a long time poet friend. Hugs back, SuZ

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/30/2024 10:02:00 AM

Dear Suzanne, your celestial poem dances across the cosmos with breathtaking grace! The wonderful, lyrical imagery of painted constellations, bowing auroras, and twilight's shadows cast a spellbinding aura. I loved how you captured the enchantress' power to bend the universe to her will. This transcendent piece elevates the spirit and ignites the imagination. A true tour de force of beauty and wonder! - Blessings, Daniel

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/4/2024 2:02:00 PM

Hello Daniel: Thanks for leaving this encouraging comment. I hope to read and comment more soon. Been settling back in from being away for a few months. SuZ

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/29/2024 2:59:00 PM

Very phantasical Suzzane a rich piece of Creations splendour here.'

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/4/2024 2:00:00 PM

Thanks Joe. I have been out of the soup travelling. Thanks for stopping in and having a cuppa. SuZ

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/7/2024 3:53:00 PM

Phantasmagorical, fantastic fantasy, Suzanne. Kudos, Gershon

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/4/2024 1:58:00 PM

Many Thanks Gershon: You are fantastic too. SuZ

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/7/2024 11:52:00 AM

Gorgeous piece. Also what a cool photo.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/4/2024 1:57:00 PM

Belated thanks, Richard. Love the pictures you can find in Pixabay and Splashe.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/3/2024 12:30:00 AM

Wow! Ethereal and enchanting. Loved the coupling of picture with verse. Great write.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/6/2024 5:12:00 AM

Good to see you back again, Eileen I feel honored by your visit. SuZ

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/2/2024 6:26:00 PM

Belated congratulations on POTD SuZ. You have a beautiful imagination. You really should write more often. I hope all is well with you and yours.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/6/2024 5:12:00 AM

Thanks so much for your visit, Daniel: I appreciate your faith in my writing. I will try to apply myself again soon. Returning to the mountains again soon could help inspire. SuZ

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/29/2024 1:57:00 PM

What a great photo to go along with this gem. I enjoyed giving it a read.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/29/2024 4:40:00 PM

Thanks Rich. I wrote it to Suzette’s Challenge theme. I was so surprised it was selected as POTD.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2024 1:58:00 PM

P.S. congratulations on POTD.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/28/2024 2:34:00 PM

Suzanne, the great thing about this poem is how it highlights just how vulnerable and small we all are. It's something to think about...although there are no really good answers I've been able to surmise as of yet...and I really don't expect to anytime before my demise.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/29/2024 4:42:00 PM

I agree Duke. If we could only really appreciate and fathom just what a miracle this world around us is let alone the whole universe.

Christina Bowring

Date: 4/24/2024 3:39:00 PM

Not sure how I missed this gem dear Suz but many belated congratulations on POTD. I love this including the title and stunning picture. Such a gorgeous scene full of vivid imagery painted from your artistic, poetic pen. ‘ the moon dances to dawn’s blush’ - wonderful line. Really enjoyed this magical, celestial read. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/24/2024 4:13:00 PM

Thanks so much Christina. I appreciate your lovely comment. SuZ

Deb M

Date: 4/23/2024 6:04:00 AM

Belated POTD Congratulations Suzanne on your lovely mystical enchanting write! Debx

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/24/2024 4:12:00 PM

Thanks Deb: So good to see you. Sorry I have been here off and on with an eye infection. Will visit soon. Have a great weekend. SuZ

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 4/21/2024 1:56:00 AM

A fab imaginative poem, starry eyed poetics wow! Kudos! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^*> Plz also read and comment my newest poem too

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/18/2024 8:09:00 PM

Dear Suz, I was the first to comment on your wonderful poem, and now I'm back to congratulate you on your well-deserved POTD

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/19/2024 6:41:00 AM

Thanks Lassad, Dear Friend: Your encouraging comments always lift me up. SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2024 8:50:00 AM

Well, I don't know if you did it right or wrong, but you sure made it pretty. And congrats on a POTD!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/17/2024 4:59:00 PM

Thanks Andrea Hope you are doing well. SuZ

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/17/2024 8:16:00 AM

Awesomeness SuZ. Congratulations on the honor of POTD!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/17/2024 4:58:00 PM

Thanks Linda: I appreciate your visit. SuZ

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/17/2024 3:14:00 AM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., SuZ :) - hugs

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/17/2024 3:38:00 AM

Thanks so muc, Anne Lise : An unexpected surprise tp me. Hope you are well. SuZ

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/16/2024 4:22:00 PM

Congrats on POTD!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/17/2024 3:37:00 AM

Thanks Kim: I was sure I responded to your comment, I appreciate your congrats, SuZ

Silent One

Date: 4/16/2024 12:39:00 AM

A wonderful choice for POTD...Congratulations

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/16/2024 3:42:00 PM

Thanks SI: It made my day to be chosen - that’s for sure. Thanks for the congrats and nice comment. SuZ

Daisy Meadows

Date: 4/16/2024 12:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD. Well written.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/16/2024 3:43:00 PM

Jeanette: I appreciate the good wishes. SuZ

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/15/2024 7:55:00 PM

Congratulations on the selection of this enchanting poem as POTD, Suzanne! ~ Magic and Mystery, Gershon

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/16/2024 3:45:00 PM

I appreciate your good wishes, Gershon Writte on. SuZ

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/15/2024 7:38:00 PM

' the moon dances to dawn’s blush. ' Such a beautiful image to behold. Your thoughts caress the page with elegance and grace. Congratulations Suzanne, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/16/2024 3:46:00 PM

Hi Brandy: I appreciate your lovely comment. Best to you too. SuZ

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