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The Waltz of Time

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This is another Erasure taken from the text Suzette Richards shared. I enjoy these kind of word puzzles. Now, will I wonder,  did I enter the right one? 

a celestial dancer, through the veil of existence, paints the cosmos with hues unseen illuminating constellations auroras bow, the moon dances to dawn’s blush, twilight casting shadows upon the land where miracles bloom. Enchantress watch, the universe bends to your will.

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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2024 1:57:00 PM
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What a great photo to go along with this gem. I enjoyed giving it a read.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/29/2024 4:40:00 PM
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Thanks Rich. I wrote it to Suzette’s Challenge theme. I was so surprised it was selected as POTD.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2024 1:58:00 PM
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P.S. congratulations on POTD.
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 4/28/2024 2:34:00 PM
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Suzanne, the great thing about this poem is how it highlights just how vulnerable and small we all are. It's something to think about...although there are no really good answers I've been able to surmise as of yet...and I really don't expect to anytime before my demise.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/29/2024 4:42:00 PM
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I agree Duke. If we could only really appreciate and fathom just what a miracle this world around us is let alone the whole universe.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 4/24/2024 3:39:00 PM
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Not sure how I missed this gem dear Suz but many belated congratulations on POTD. I love this including the title and stunning picture. Such a gorgeous scene full of vivid imagery painted from your artistic, poetic pen. ‘ the moon dances to dawn’s blush’ - wonderful line. Really enjoyed this magical, celestial read. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/24/2024 4:13:00 PM
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Thanks so much Christina. I appreciate your lovely comment. SuZ
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Deb M
Date: 4/23/2024 6:04:00 AM
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Belated POTD Congratulations Suzanne on your lovely mystical enchanting write! Debx
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/24/2024 4:12:00 PM
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Thanks Deb: So good to see you. Sorry I have been here off and on with an eye infection. Will visit soon. Have a great weekend. SuZ
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 4/21/2024 1:56:00 AM
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A fab imaginative poem, starry eyed poetics wow! Kudos! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^*> Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
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Sotto Poet
Date: 4/18/2024 8:09:00 PM
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Dear Suz, I was the first to comment on your wonderful poem, and now I'm back to congratulate you on your well-deserved POTD
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/19/2024 6:41:00 AM
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Thanks Lassad, Dear Friend: Your encouraging comments always lift me up. SuZ
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/17/2024 8:50:00 AM
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Well, I don't know if you did it right or wrong, but you sure made it pretty. And congrats on a POTD!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/17/2024 4:59:00 PM
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Thanks Andrea Hope you are doing well. SuZ
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/17/2024 8:16:00 AM
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Awesomeness SuZ. Congratulations on the honor of POTD!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/17/2024 4:58:00 PM
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Thanks Linda: I appreciate your visit. SuZ
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/17/2024 3:14:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., SuZ :) - hugs
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/17/2024 3:38:00 AM
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Thanks so muc, Anne Lise : An unexpected surprise tp me. Hope you are well. SuZ
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/16/2024 4:22:00 PM
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Congrats on POTD!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/17/2024 3:37:00 AM
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Thanks Kim: I was sure I responded to your comment, I appreciate your congrats, SuZ
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Silent One
Date: 4/16/2024 12:39:00 AM
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A wonderful choice for POTD...Congratulations
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/16/2024 3:42:00 PM
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Thanks SI: It made my day to be chosen - that’s for sure. Thanks for the congrats and nice comment. SuZ
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Jeanette Brewin
Date: 4/16/2024 12:17:00 AM
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Congratulations on your POTD. Well written.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/16/2024 3:43:00 PM
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Jeanette: I appreciate the good wishes. SuZ
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/15/2024 7:55:00 PM
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Congratulations on the selection of this enchanting poem as POTD, Suzanne! ~ Magic and Mystery, Gershon
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/16/2024 3:45:00 PM
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I appreciate your good wishes, Gershon Writte on. SuZ
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/15/2024 7:38:00 PM
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' the moon dances to dawn’s blush. ' Such a beautiful image to behold. Your thoughts caress the page with elegance and grace. Congratulations Suzanne, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/16/2024 3:46:00 PM
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Hi Brandy: I appreciate your lovely comment. Best to you too. SuZ
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/15/2024 7:20:00 PM
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A gorgeous poem, SuZ! Congatulatios on POTD. This jewel is in my faves. :)
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/16/2024 3:46:00 PM
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Thanks Evelyn. Nice catching up with you. SuZ
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I Am Anaya
Date: 4/15/2024 1:47:00 PM
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Enchanting poem of the day Congratulations, Suzette! ~Anaya
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/15/2024 5:36:00 PM
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Thankyou so much, Anaya I was pleasantly surprised. SuZ
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 4/15/2024 8:28:00 AM
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A poem that deserves a POTD. Written in Free Verse, it is magnificent.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/15/2024 5:35:00 PM
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Thankyou Victor. Very much appreciated. SuZ
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Bill Baker
Date: 4/15/2024 8:05:00 AM
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A delightful poem, Suz. Congratulations on your POTD, my friend! Enjoy your special day of recognition! Bill
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/15/2024 5:35:00 PM
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Thankyou Bill. Good to see you . SuZ
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/15/2024 7:41:00 AM
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How picturesque! Congratulations Pangie xx
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/15/2024 5:34:00 PM
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Many thanks, Pangie.
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 4/15/2024 7:26:00 AM
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Dear Suzanne, Wonderful imagery in this lovely POTD.A hearty congratulations to you. Enjoyed it..
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/15/2024 5:33:00 PM
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Thanks Nancy. I do appreciate you stopping by. SuZ
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/15/2024 7:25:00 AM
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Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely Write. I really enjoyed it. Have a blessed day/week writing away...............................
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/15/2024 5:31:00 PM
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Thanks Paula: I appreciate your visit and always lovely comments. Cheers, SuZ
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/15/2024 7:24:00 AM
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An enjoyable read Suz, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/15/2024 9:53:00 AM
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So good to see you my friend. I hope you are back to good health. Will check your page soon. SuZ
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 4/15/2024 6:47:00 AM
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Congratulations on POTD. I totally enjoy this poem.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/15/2024 7:05:00 AM
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Thank you for letting me know, Hilda That was so nice to have you visit. SuZ
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John Lawless
Date: 4/15/2024 6:45:00 AM
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"the moon dances to dawn's blush'...very nicely painted Suzanne. there is a rhythm and a cadence to time....let the dance begin.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/15/2024 7:04:00 AM
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Hey John: The best time is when you are enjoying yourself so much you don’t notice it passing. Smiles, SuZ
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Warren Doll
Date: 4/15/2024 6:28:00 AM
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Suzanne, just wonderful. Congratulations om POTD~ Warren
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/15/2024 7:03:00 AM
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I appreciate you taking the time to comment, Warren Cheers, SuZ
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