Notes About The Poem

This is another Erasure taken from the text Suzette Richards shared. I enjoy these kind of word puzzles. Now, will I wonder,  did I enter the right one? 

The Waltz of Time

a celestial dancer,
through the veil of existence, 
paints the cosmos with hues unseen
illuminating constellations 
auroras bow,
the moon dances to dawn’s blush, 
twilight casting shadows upon the land
where miracles bloom.

Enchantress watch,
the universe bends to your will.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Romios Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 2:15 PM
Belated Congrats Suzanne. How beautifully penned. And outsranding image,, to boot! Pangie
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 9:57 AM
great image and a befitting poetry! I believe we humans can only get a brief taste of the creation in our life time! The only way to experience the entirety of it is to be enlightened. That is when we merge with everything there is! Great inspiring write.
Rose  Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 9:05 AM
wow to both the words and the image Suz, loved it, :)
Delaney Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 1:25 PM
Thanks Vie Good to see you, always. SuZ
Onclaud Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 6:06 AM
Hi suz...I sorely missed you and your poetry... this gem sparkles with galactic turns of metaphors: a fascinating read...thanks for dropping by...huggs
Delaney Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 6:41 AM
Dear Nette: You were also missed and your beautiful poetry. Life gets in the way a lot and yet we keep our friendships close. Hugs back, SuZ
Gasun Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 9:44 AM
A fabulous write my dear poet friend Suz. Your talent in poetry shines as always. Belated CONGRATULATIONS for a well-deserved POTD. Loving this gem and enjoying it a lot. I'm so glad to read from you again my dear poet friend. Thank you so much. Thank you so much to for your loving visit. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
Delaney Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 7:31 AM
Thanks for your uplifting comment. Always a joy to hear from a long time poet friend. Hugs back, SuZ
Rodgers Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 10:02 AM
Dear Suzanne, your celestial poem dances across the cosmos with breathtaking grace! The wonderful, lyrical imagery of painted constellations, bowing auroras, and twilight's shadows cast a spellbinding aura. I loved how you captured the enchantress' power to bend the universe to her will. This transcendent piece elevates the spirit and ignites the imagination. A true tour de force of beauty and wonder! - Blessings, Daniel
Delaney Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 2:02 PM
Hello Daniel: Thanks for leaving this encouraging comment. I hope to read and comment more soon. Been settling back in from being away for a few months. SuZ
Maverick Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 2:59 PM
Very phantasical Suzzane a rich piece of Creations splendour here.'
Delaney Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 2:00 PM
Thanks Joe. I have been out of the soup travelling. Thanks for stopping in and having a cuppa. SuZ
Wolf Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 3:53 PM
Phantasmagorical, fantastic fantasy, Suzanne. Kudos, Gershon
Delaney Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 1:58 PM
Many Thanks Gershon: You are fantastic too. SuZ
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 11:52 AM
Gorgeous piece. Also what a cool photo.
Delaney Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 1:57 PM
Belated thanks, Richard. Love the pictures you can find in Pixabay and Splashe.
Manassian Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 12:30 AM
Wow! Ethereal and enchanting. Loved the coupling of picture with verse. Great write.
Delaney Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 5:12 AM
Good to see you back again, Eileen I feel honored by your visit. SuZ
Turner Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 6:26 PM
Belated congratulations on POTD SuZ. You have a beautiful imagination. You really should write more often. I hope all is well with you and yours.
Delaney Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 5:12 AM
Thanks so much for your visit, Daniel: I appreciate your faith in my writing. I will try to apply myself again soon. Returning to the mountains again soon could help inspire. SuZ
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 1:57 PM
What a great photo to go along with this gem. I enjoyed giving it a read.
Delaney Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 4:40 PM
Thanks Rich. I wrote it to Suzette’s Challenge theme. I was so surprised it was selected as POTD.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 1:58 PM
P.S. congratulations on POTD.
Beaufort Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 2:34 PM
Suzanne, the great thing about this poem is how it highlights just how vulnerable and small we all are. It's something to think about...although there are no really good answers I've been able to surmise as of yet...and I really don't expect to anytime before my demise.
Delaney Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 4:42 PM
I agree Duke. If we could only really appreciate and fathom just what a miracle this world around us is let alone the whole universe.
Bowring Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 3:39 PM
Not sure how I missed this gem dear Suz but many belated congratulations on POTD. I love this including the title and stunning picture. Such a gorgeous scene full of vivid imagery painted from your artistic, poetic pen. ‘ the moon dances to dawn’s blush’ - wonderful line. Really enjoyed this magical, celestial read. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
Delaney Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 4:13 PM
Thanks so much Christina. I appreciate your lovely comment. SuZ
M  Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 6:04 AM
Belated POTD Congratulations Suzanne on your lovely mystical enchanting write! Debx
Delaney Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 4:12 PM
Thanks Deb: So good to see you. Sorry I have been here off and on with an eye infection. Will visit soon. Have a great weekend. SuZ
Kamoonpuri Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 1:56 AM
A fab imaginative poem, starry eyed poetics wow! Kudos! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^*> Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
Poet Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 8:09 PM
Dear Suz, I was the first to comment on your wonderful poem, and now I'm back to congratulate you on your well-deserved POTD
Delaney Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 6:41 AM
Thanks Lassad, Dear Friend: Your encouraging comments always lift me up. SuZ
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 8:50 AM
Well, I don't know if you did it right or wrong, but you sure made it pretty. And congrats on a POTD!
Delaney Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 4:59 PM
Thanks Andrea Hope you are doing well. SuZ
Fowler Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 8:16 AM
Awesomeness SuZ. Congratulations on the honor of POTD!
Delaney Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 4:58 PM
Thanks Linda: I appreciate your visit. SuZ
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 3:14 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., SuZ :) - hugs
Delaney Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 3:38 AM
Thanks so muc, Anne Lise : An unexpected surprise tp me. Hope you are well. SuZ
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 4:22 PM
Congrats on POTD!
Delaney Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 3:37 AM
Thanks Kim: I was sure I responded to your comment, I appreciate your congrats, SuZ
One Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 12:39 AM
A wonderful choice for POTD...Congratulations
Delaney Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 3:42 PM
Thanks SI: It made my day to be chosen - that’s for sure. Thanks for the congrats and nice comment. SuZ
Meadows Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 12:17 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well written.
Delaney Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 3:43 PM
Jeanette: I appreciate the good wishes. SuZ
Wolf Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 7:55 PM
Congratulations on the selection of this enchanting poem as POTD, Suzanne! ~ Magic and Mystery, Gershon
Delaney Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 3:45 PM
I appreciate your good wishes, Gershon Writte on. SuZ
Nicole Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 7:38 PM
' the moon dances to dawn’s blush. ' Such a beautiful image to behold. Your thoughts caress the page with elegance and grace. Congratulations Suzanne, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Delaney Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 3:46 PM
Hi Brandy: I appreciate your lovely comment. Best to you too. SuZ
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