The Waltz of a Poetess and Endless Conundrums



She, suffered in angst and a deep loneliness,
As her jasmined poertry, was new and just growing.
“What good are my poems regarding truthfulness 
or honesty?”
Against seas of creative poems, puff-pretty, bright 
And glowing?

The icy, winter,rains came and gave her not a 
whisp of a warm answer.
Her soul and stomach did crave some reprise..
“No, no, rest, dear poetess,”….words whispered 
came in the form of a mystical soul- prancer.

Then..what to do, she most freely wept!
“Stop looking for readers of my poems?”
Is there a wondrous secret being kept?
“Stop, stop”, the laughing, winter-prancer said.

“Each poem you wrote once sweetly slept in
the soft bed of your heart.”
“Let it be go now….and like a newborn eagle..
alight with freedom and depart.”

Dedicated to Joe Maverick in Australia, on the 
loss of his cat, Tibbles.! Condolences.
Your kndness to me has always been 
appreciated! 
Huggs~Pangie

***Written sometine in my early years here***
1/6/2024

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 1/8/2024 4:00:00 PM
A heartfelt tribute for Joe Maverick's beloved cat, Tibbles. You've penned so compassionately, Pangie. xxxx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/8/2024 4:36:00 PM
I do try Regina, )) but I hardly consider myself a good poet at all. I am not an imagist. But you are so Right…..Compassion plus truth count most.even… at the cost of popularity. My piems are a legacy to ny family…thank you, Pangie
Date: 1/8/2024 9:17:00 AM
A lovely write for Tibbles/Joe Maverick cat. It was nice of you to write this... Have a wonderful day...............
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Date: 1/8/2024 9:39:00 AM
Hi my friend! I hope this day is gonna be really magical for you. I appreciate your comment on the phone and about Joe too.. Thank you, Paula Pangie
Date: 1/7/2024 3:05:00 PM
Amazing write, my friend. 'Each poem you wrote once slept in the soft bed of your heart' -- such a delicate line with inspirational imagery. Excelsior, gw
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/7/2024 6:37:00 PM
Yes, great, i am not good with imagery, Gershon. The Psalms are inspirational, no me. So are other poets. Thats only one of many skills I am missing. Sendbrain, aSAP. Pangie)))
Date: 1/6/2024 11:25:00 AM
This excellent poem about poems was riveting. It was so sad at the end to hear about the death of a pet. May your Friend's cat be happy in cat heaven.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/6/2024 11:48:00 AM
Hilda, i like that…a poem about piems.)) Joe Maverick is the one who lost a cat …Hes the comment …..right before yours. Have a great day. Pangie
Date: 1/6/2024 4:49:00 AM
What a lovely write, Pangie. A wonderful and thoughtful dedication to Joe. "Each poem you wrote once sweetly slept in the soft bed of your heart" Love, love, love this! Happy New Year! Keep 'em comin' Charlie
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/6/2024 11:31:00 AM
Greetings, Charles, nice to have you visiting my poetry home today. I likes the same line you quoted! Losing a pet is very similar losing a close friend. They’re always with you and then suddenly? They are gone. So I was glad with the kids respond to Joe Pangie
Date: 1/6/2024 2:59:00 AM
Lovely dedication to Joe, losing a family pet is heartbreaking. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Date: 1/6/2024 3:15:00 AM
You are right on the money time? And it takes a while to overcome the same pet. I hope Joe will be OK.. Thank you for being sensitive man. Pangie
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