The Waltz

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Heavy fog shrouds near and distant
 trees, outlines visible
 Roosters sing, spirits undaunted
 Birds chirp though invisible
 
Spider webs damp and silver tones
 appear, strung up, sticky
 Humans, and unsuspecting bugs
 touch, disturb, so tricky
 
Desire creeps in, opens avenues
 Heart and mind dance waltz
 Opposed to each's longings~ hidden
 Which will win~good or faults
 
Holy Spirit release your strength
 The dynamite promised
 Help this weak human spirit hold
 on strength of the palmist

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/4/2017 7:58:00 AM
just enjoying this lovely spiritual piece again
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Date: 5/24/2017 2:21:00 PM
I was pleasantly surprised as I was expecting to read some poem about a dancing couple in love, and instead I read this wonderful write chalk full of vivid images and metaphors. A beautiful write! Love, Juli-Michelle
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/25/2017 8:22:00 AM
Juli-Michelle, Thats for the nice review of my work..I am pleasantly surprised of the kind comments..Your presence is appreciated..Sara
Date: 5/23/2017 4:06:00 PM
beautiful spiritual write, my friend
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/25/2017 8:23:00 AM
Jack,Thanks for dropping by..I appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment on my work..I am glad that you saw the spiritual..Sara
Date: 5/22/2017 2:38:00 PM
A very profound piece :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/22/2017 5:06:00 PM
Carol B, Thanks for the uplifting review..You presence at my work is encouraging..Sara
Date: 5/20/2017 4:44:00 PM
Agreed, Sara...you are a good person!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/21/2017 6:41:00 AM
James, Good to hear from you again..Thanks for the uplifting review..Sara
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