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Heavy fog shrouds near and distant trees, outlines visible Roosters sing, spirits undaunted Birds chirp though invisible Spider webs damp and silver tones appear, strung up, sticky Humans, and unsuspecting bugs touch, disturb, so tricky Desire creeps in, opens avenues Heart and mind dance waltz Opposed to each's longings~ hidden Which will win~good or faults Holy Spirit release your strength The dynamite promised Help this weak human spirit hold on strength of the palmist

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Date: 6/4/2017 7:58:00 AM
just enjoying this lovely spiritual piece again
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Date: 5/24/2017 2:21:00 PM
I was pleasantly surprised as I was expecting to read some poem about a dancing couple in love, and instead I read this wonderful write chalk full of vivid images and metaphors. A beautiful write! Love, Juli-Michelle
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/25/2017 8:22:00 AM
Juli-Michelle, Thats for the nice review of my work..I am pleasantly surprised of the kind comments..Your presence is appreciated..Sara
Date: 5/23/2017 4:06:00 PM
beautiful spiritual write, my friend
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/25/2017 8:23:00 AM
Jack,Thanks for dropping by..I appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment on my work..I am glad that you saw the spiritual..Sara
Date: 5/22/2017 2:38:00 PM
A very profound piece :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/22/2017 5:06:00 PM
Carol B, Thanks for the uplifting review..You presence at my work is encouraging..Sara
Date: 5/20/2017 4:44:00 PM
Agreed, Sara...you are a good person!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/21/2017 6:41:00 AM
James, Good to hear from you again..Thanks for the uplifting review..Sara

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