The Wall

The wall of russet brick, which, once resplendent,
ever crumbles leaving gaps; a toothless grin
slicing landscape. No longer the defendant
between the plebeians and the crown within,
the ancestral barrier is at death’s door; 
rifled masonry builds shelter for the poor,
bridled meadows slowly overgrow the rest;
a child skips oblivious across, now blessed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Crandall Avatar
May 9, 2024 at 10:28 AM
Great description which you can see and feel.
Miller Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 3:21 AM
Thank you David
Ashley Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 9:13 AM
Dear Terry, I feel the wonder of the past and the melancholy of the present in your stirring and soulful poem. "What was" now replaced by "what is". Rich, beautiful imagery captures moments of time, people (plebeians) past and present, and especially intriguing, is your last line. A grand finale, whether one reads it literally or metaphorically. A deep, textured poem to linger with.. Congratulations for your win in Emile's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Miller Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 2:25 AM
Thank you Susan for your kind and meaningful comments, much appreciated
Fowler Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 10:14 AM
hmmm - smooth flow from the old to the new... Very nice Terry. Congratulations! :)
Miller Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 9:29 AM
Thank you so much
Pinet Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 11:15 AM
Congratulations Terry! Your poem earned you a distinguished place in my contest. This form is challenging and difficult to judge, but yours made my list. Very well done, my friend, Emile.
Miller Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 9:58 AM
Thank you Emile, another challenging contest, thank you, and for the placement and kind comments
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