The Walking Race

A stranger crossed me on the road
And after my rapid pace he took note,
He challenged me to a walking race
To a finish line without a place

The stranger's longer legs made for fierce competition
But my younger age gave me the ambition of one walking away from ten years in prison
We laughed till he became a friend 
And forgetting the end, 

My feet broke into a run
And I conceded defeat once I realized what I'd done, 

But in crossing paths I still felt I'd won.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 3:09 PM
- A great prize, Amy ... friendship is not always easy to find along the road - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sell Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 8:30 PM
All too true; thank you for the hugs, Anne-Lise!
Cunningham Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 3:04 PM
Haha, I've only got short legs so count me out. Tom
Cunningham Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 6:29 AM
Count me in then Amy.
Sell Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 8:29 PM
That's alright; words count, too!
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