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The Wake

a boat passes by dark ripple left in its wake the only mar on aqua blue ocean like glass ... its trail stands out to the eye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/8/2012 12:26:00 AM
Very nice, Francine. typo for it's. I can't decide which of your tankas I love most.
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Date: 10/7/2012 10:04:00 PM
They are just like the vapor trails left by jet engines in the sky. Another good tanka.
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