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The Wake

"My pen drips of sorrow and on this paper, I write each tear" The Wake I step into a solemn room, many people there In silence I proceed and slip into a chair In front of me the coffin, with the body shown So we can offer our respects to this person we have known Soft music drifts dreamily, perceived more then heard While all those in attendance listen to the reverends word Sadness and a sense of loss hangs heavy in the air And sounds of sobs from loved ones come from everywhere I feel my emotions rise, and know that I will cry It will be very difficult for me to say goodbye I've seen him grow from just a kid to the man that he became But that time is now behind us since God has called his name He's everybody's brother, husband, dad or son He took a pledge to fight for me, and now that fight is done It is so sad that one so young, life's cycle is complete Just yesterday he was to me the kid just down the street I approach the casket, and feel a sense of pride That I'd had a chance to know this boy, who for me has died He lies there in his uniform, medals on his chest I whisper "job well done my son, now it's time to rest" As I leave the funeral home, replete with heavy heart My mind mourns all our children who have died doing their part My thoughts turn to the ones that are still fighting yet today Our father, keep them safe from harm til they come home I pray

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/7/2012 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Holding out for a Hero" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 5/7/2012 1:53:00 PM
Thank you Carol
Date: 5/7/2012 11:43:00 AM
Belated congratulations Bob on a very poignant poem xx
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Bob Quigley
Date: 5/7/2012 1:53:00 PM
Thank you Mandy
Date: 5/6/2012 9:24:00 AM
So true..so final..so fatal...Congrad's on your heart on the man you are..and the sight you have with pen in hand to bring to the world. Light & Love
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Bob Quigley
Date: 5/7/2012 1:52:00 PM
Kind words indeed Debbie. Thanks
Date: 5/6/2012 7:42:00 AM
Congrats on your well written, well deserved win, Bob. It's tragic that so many of our young men have made this supreme sacrafice! This is what the word HERO is all about! Awesome piece, my friend. Made my eyes water. Kudos. Thanks for your comments. Best to you and yours. God bless. Ralph
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Bob Quigley
Date: 5/7/2012 1:52:00 PM
Appreciate your comments Ralph
Date: 5/6/2012 5:46:00 AM
A very deserving win Bob, I loved reading every word of it ~Jess
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Bob Quigley
Date: 5/7/2012 1:51:00 PM
Thank you Jess
Date: 5/6/2012 5:00:00 AM
great poetry Bob, very touching and true of the great loss felt...
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Bob Quigley
Date: 5/7/2012 1:50:00 PM
Appreciate it Don
Date: 5/6/2012 3:38:00 AM
Congratulations Bob on your wonderful win!! Thank you for this write!! It is so touching and dear to us all!! Well Done!! And Congrats on all your recent wins :) lol...big hugs,love ya ~deb
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Bob Quigley
Date: 5/7/2012 1:50:00 PM
Thanks Deb
Date: 5/5/2012 5:55:00 PM
I knew this one would have to be at the top. You found all of the words the rest of us were searching for. Congratulations on a top notch win. Love, Joyce
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Bob Quigley
Date: 5/5/2012 9:01:00 PM
Thank you Joyce. Very nice of you to say,
Date: 5/5/2012 3:13:00 PM
Bob, one of the most reverent, patriotic, emotive poems I have ever read...So glad it was chosen as numero uno! Congrats on a shining write! :) Gwendolen
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Bob Quigley
Date: 5/5/2012 3:45:00 PM
Thanks so much Gwen. Very kind.
Date: 8/16/2011 2:47:00 PM
Congratulations Bob, on your first place win in my contest, this poem was just so heartbreaking, it truly spoke to my soul~~
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Bob Quigley
Date: 8/16/2011 4:27:00 PM
Thank you Constance. I'm glad you found it worthy.
Date: 8/15/2011 2:11:00 PM
Many congratulations on all your wins, Bob : )
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Bob Quigley
Date: 8/16/2011 4:28:00 PM
Thanks Jack
Date: 8/15/2011 12:34:00 PM
Transforming through an episode that we all have been through,however yours being of military,which holds a needless loss of life,in my eyes. Brilliantly worded Bob and a well deserved placing blessings Paul
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Bob Quigley
Date: 8/16/2011 4:28:00 PM
Kind words Paul. Thank you
Date: 8/15/2011 12:20:00 PM
Wow, Bob this sure is such a moving write-- I could imagine myself being there...super congrats for this very touching and heartfelt write!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 8/16/2011 4:29:00 PM
And thank you for your comments nikko
Date: 8/15/2011 11:41:00 AM
wow, chris.. a brief but rich shout-out of congrats on your glowing top win before soup knocks me off.. awhhh! huggs :) :)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 8/16/2011 4:30:00 PM
I'm not chris, but many thanks anyway and much appreciated
Date: 8/15/2011 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Bob for taking the time to honor our freedom's brother. Quite an honor to read you moving poem presentation in Constance's "Just Write" Contest. Congratulations on your top honor. Agape, Moses
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Bob Quigley
Date: 8/16/2011 4:32:00 PM
And thank you john for taking the time to read it
Date: 8/15/2011 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "Just Write" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 8/16/2011 4:33:00 PM
Many thanks Carol
Date: 8/15/2011 1:42:00 AM
A great poem on the sacrifice of our best of the best. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Bob Quigley
Date: 8/15/2011 10:05:00 AM
Thank you Joyce
Date: 8/14/2011 10:48:00 PM
Congrats Bob on your first place win with these awesome words luv.. super...
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Bob Quigley
Date: 8/15/2011 10:07:00 AM
Very much appreciated Linda-Marie. Did I ever tell you I love that name. Would make a great poem about a boat named Linda-Marie.. Will have to think about it.
Date: 8/11/2011 11:29:00 AM
Bob your poetry has amazed me today. Thank you for posting it for us all to read and enjoy. Hoping you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 8/15/2011 10:07:00 AM
Thank you Carol
Date: 8/10/2011 3:45:00 PM
such a deep somber piece Bob but so important to keep the memories alive.. my youngest son of five is in the military in Libya right now but due home Thanksgiving.. a fitting tribute to all who have lost their lives ...heroes one and all..luv..
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Bob Quigley
Date: 8/16/2011 4:34:00 PM
That means a lot coming from a soldiers mom. Thank you

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