The Wake

"My pen drips of sorrow and on this paper, I write each tear"


The Wake

I step into a solemn room, many people there
In silence I proceed and slip into a chair
In front of me the coffin, with the body shown
So we can offer our respects to this person we have known

Soft music drifts dreamily, perceived more then heard
While all those in attendance listen to the reverends word
Sadness and a sense of loss hangs heavy in the air
And sounds of sobs from loved ones come from everywhere

I feel my emotions rise, and know that I will cry
It will be very difficult for me to say goodbye
I've seen him grow from just a kid to the man that he became
But that time is now behind us since God has called his name

He's everybody's brother, husband, dad or son
He took a pledge to fight for me, and now that fight is done
It is so sad that one so young, life's cycle is complete
Just yesterday he was to me the kid just down the street

I approach the casket, and feel a sense of pride
That I'd had a chance to know this boy, who for me has died
He lies there in his uniform, medals on his chest
I whisper "job well done my son, now it's time to rest"

As I leave the funeral home, replete with heavy heart
My mind mourns all our children who have died doing their part
My thoughts turn to the ones that are still fighting yet today
Our father, keep them safe from harm til they come home I pray
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 1:03 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Holding out for a Hero" contest Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 1:53 PM
Thank you Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 11:43 AM
Belated congratulations Bob on a very poignant poem xx
Quigley Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 1:53 PM
Thank you Mandy
Guzzi Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 9:24 AM
So true..so final..so fatal...Congrad's on your heart on the man you are..and the sight you have with pen in hand to bring to the world. Light & Love
Quigley Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 1:52 PM
Kind words indeed Debbie. Thanks
Taylor Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 7:42 AM
Congrats on your well written, well deserved win, Bob. It's tragic that so many of our young men have made this supreme sacrafice! This is what the word HERO is all about! Awesome piece, my friend. Made my eyes water. Kudos. Thanks for your comments. Best to you and yours. God bless. Ralph
Quigley Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 1:52 PM
Appreciate your comments Ralph
Howell Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 5:46 AM
A very deserving win Bob, I loved reading every word of it ~Jess
Quigley Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 1:51 PM
Thank you Jess
Johnson Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 5:00 AM
great poetry Bob, very touching and true of the great loss felt...
Quigley Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 1:50 PM
Appreciate it Don
Burch Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 3:38 AM
Congratulations Bob on your wonderful win!! Thank you for this write!! It is so touching and dear to us all!! Well Done!! And Congrats on all your recent wins :) lol...big hugs,love ya ~deb
Quigley Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 1:50 PM
Thanks Deb
Johnson Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 5:55 PM
I knew this one would have to be at the top. You found all of the words the rest of us were searching for. Congratulations on a top notch win. Love, Joyce
Quigley Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 9:01 PM
Thank you Joyce. Very nice of you to say,
Song Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 3:13 PM
Bob, one of the most reverent, patriotic, emotive poems I have ever read...So glad it was chosen as numero uno! Congrats on a shining write! :) Gwendolen
Quigley Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 3:45 PM
Thanks so much Gwen. Very kind.
La France Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 2:47 PM
Congratulations Bob, on your first place win in my contest, this poem was just so heartbreaking, it truly spoke to my soul~~
Quigley Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 4:27 PM
Thank you Constance. I'm glad you found it worthy.
Horne Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 2:11 PM
Many congratulations on all your wins, Bob : )
Quigley Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 4:28 PM
Thanks Jack
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August 15, 2011 at 12:34 PM
Transforming through an episode that we all have been through,however yours being of military,which holds a needless loss of life,in my eyes. Brilliantly worded Bob and a well deserved placing blessings Paul
Quigley Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 4:28 PM
Kind words Paul. Thank you
K. Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 12:20 PM
Wow, Bob this sure is such a moving write-- I could imagine myself being there...super congrats for this very touching and heartfelt write!
Quigley Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 4:29 PM
And thank you for your comments nikko
Onclaud Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 11:41 AM
wow, chris.. a brief but rich shout-out of congrats on your glowing top win before soup knocks me off.. awhhh! huggs :) :)
Quigley Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 4:30 PM
I'm not chris, but many thanks anyway and much appreciated
Freeman Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 10:58 AM
Thanks Bob for taking the time to honor our freedom's brother. Quite an honor to read you moving poem presentation in Constance's "Just Write" Contest. Congratulations on your top honor. Agape, Moses
Quigley Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 4:32 PM
And thank you john for taking the time to read it
Brown Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "Just Write" contest Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 4:33 PM
Many thanks Carol
Johnson Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 1:42 AM
A great poem on the sacrifice of our best of the best. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Quigley Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 10:05 AM
Thank you Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 10:48 PM
Congrats Bob on your first place win with these awesome words luv.. super...
Quigley Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 10:07 AM
Very much appreciated Linda-Marie. Did I ever tell you I love that name. Would make a great poem about a boat named Linda-Marie.. Will have to think about it.
Brown Avatar
August 11, 2011 at 11:29 AM
Bob your poetry has amazed me today. Thank you for posting it for us all to read and enjoy. Hoping you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 10:07 AM
Thank you Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 3:45 PM
such a deep somber piece Bob but so important to keep the memories alive.. my youngest son of five is in the military in Libya right now but due home Thanksgiving.. a fitting tribute to all who have lost their lives ...heroes one and all..luv..
Quigley Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 4:34 PM
That means a lot coming from a soldiers mom. Thank you
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