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The Waiting Sleep

I wait while wandering in empty dreams, where everyone is lost and dying slow. And in the distance are, unheard, the screams of anguished souls I’ll never come to know. The winds blow hot or cold here, rarely cool. Leaves flutter out of sight, disintegrate. Relief, if ever found, is minuscule. I do not even know for what I wait! I’m drifting with the leaves as they change hue, concealed among them as they fall to ground. And as they crumble, I’ll be crumbling too, alone (as souls unknown hear not my sound). And still I roam inside this wait I keep, unwilling to awaken from this sleep. posted 3/27/21 N/A in the All Yours (Mar 19) Poetry Contest judged 3/18/2021 For William Kekaula's Final 2021 N-A Choice 3 Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/8/2021 9:21:00 AM
Amazing lines Andrea - waiting inside of a dream. So original and so unique. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/8/2021 5:21:00 AM
Congrats. Love it. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/7/2021 11:26:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/7/2021 11:25:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/7/2021 10:46:00 PM
Once again, I am loving your slide to a graceful conclusion, Andrea, exceptional execution, my gratitude for your participation truly, and my compliments on your well-deserved placement my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 4/25/2021 9:08:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, Good to see you get another win with this one. You rock! At writing sonnets. A Sonneteer indeed. Congratulations, my friend, it was well-deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/24/2021 8:22:00 PM
I read your poem a few times. I found it quite absorbing, for it beckoned me to search for deeper meanings. Loved it! Congratulations Andrea!
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Date: 4/23/2021 12:35:00 PM
A waiting game in the realm of dreams, Congrats on your win Andrea..
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Date: 4/23/2021 10:31:00 AM
I found this write of yours to be very intriguing Andrea, congrats on another nice win!
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Date: 3/30/2021 12:51:00 PM
Congrats on your POTD, Andrea ~ well done
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Date: 3/25/2021 6:09:00 AM
An oldie but a goodie. Congrats on POTD. I think I would want to wake up as soon as possible from this dreamscape. Startling imagery Andrea. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 3/23/2021 12:04:00 PM
Congrats on POTD. Very beautifully done.
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Date: 3/22/2021 10:46:00 AM
Andrea, I echo Lindsay's comment. Always a pleasure to read your sonnets and observe the vast variety of ideas you write about. This one is one of your darker ones, I wonder when you wrote it and what you were thinking about as you composed these thoughts. It seems to me like an elegy of death as you watch the leaves change color and eventually die. It's just beautiful. Congrats on your POTD selection. I'm always a fan of the QoS.
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Date: 3/21/2021 7:56:00 AM
Enjoyed it...Congratulations Andrea on POTD.
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Date: 3/20/2021 6:14:00 PM
Hello Andrea … you never fail to amaze me with your sonnets. They are wonderful - Lindsay
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Date: 3/19/2021 3:27:00 PM
Maybe we all feel like we're drifting at times, Andrea. Compelling lines about the souls you may never come to know. An interesting and well-composed sonnet! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 3/19/2021 6:23:00 AM
Hey Andrea, Congrats. my friend on POTD - truly well deserved. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.
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Date: 3/18/2021 8:29:00 PM
This is a great picture of the state of the world. Congrats on your POTD and good luck in the contest.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/19/2021 7:12:00 AM
Hmm, yes, it does rather mirror the state of the world too!!!
Date: 3/18/2021 7:25:00 PM
Eerie dream! Congrats on POTD with this beautifully penned sonnet, Andrea!
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Date: 3/18/2021 5:07:00 PM
A beautifully written sonnet, Andrea! Well deserving of POTD. Congrats! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 3/18/2021 5:02:00 PM
"I wait, while everyone is lost and dying slow" Oh my ! Such a sad thought. Your entire poem touches my heart so deeply. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Andrea, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 3/18/2021 3:13:00 PM
Andrea, excellent poem and brilliant creativity. Congratulations on POTD for this gem. So well deserved.~ Warren
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Date: 3/18/2021 3:07:00 PM
My dear friend, huge congratulations on this wonderful sonnet! Excellent ending verses too, "" And as they crumble, I’ll be crumbling too, alone (as souls unknown hear not my sound). And still I roam inside this wait I keep, unwilling to awaken from this sleep."" A fav-- a jewel and -- God bless..
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Robert Lindley
Date: 3/18/2021 4:46:00 PM
The fav is truly deserved as this is a truly superbly crafted sonnet. I think you should consider writing more sonnets my dear friend as you have a very fine intuition and a great talent for it. God bless..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/18/2021 3:42:00 PM
thanks for the fav. So nice of you.
Date: 3/18/2021 2:18:00 PM
This poem is so good, so touching. Back to say congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 3/18/2021 1:18:00 PM
Fantastic, Andrea. Pangie KUDOS
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